【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 19．（北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站正在招募主持人。請(qǐng)你用英文給負(fù)責(zé)的老師 Sam 寫一封自薦信，內(nèi)容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及具體打算做的事情。提示詞語(yǔ)： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示問(wèn)題： ● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英語(yǔ)廣播站）. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua20．（安徽中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校打算舉辦一場(chǎng)以“感恩老師”為主題的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給你的美國(guó)筆友Mike 寫一封郵件，介紹這次的活動(dòng)。時(shí)間：5月30號(hào)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容： 1. 給老師獻(xiàn)花致敬；2. 把寫滿感謝祝福話語(yǔ)的卡片貼在墻上；3. 為老師表演節(jié)目（put on performances）你的感觸：……注意： 1. 詞數(shù)80100；2． 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記，請(qǐng)不要?jiǎng)h除一、初中英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)1．As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festi解析：As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語(yǔ)，我們需要組織語(yǔ)言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對(duì)者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來(lái)敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對(duì)玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語(yǔ)言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語(yǔ)法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。2．Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I解析：Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【解析】這是一篇回復(fù)書(shū)信類的提綱作文。內(nèi)容為根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容及自己的實(shí)際情況回復(fù)郵件。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：你一切都好嗎？你覺(jué)得你的英語(yǔ)課怎么樣？當(dāng)你遇到麻煩時(shí)，你會(huì)找誰(shuí)去幫忙？在動(dòng)筆前，要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)列出每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí)，需要注意書(shū)信體裁的格式，要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；注意表達(dá)的條理性、連貫性，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡符合邏輯關(guān)系；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。3．How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myse解析：How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was not good at sports. Sometimes I was late for school. The teachers were very angry with me.In the future, I will have more sports and try to plan my time carefully. I’ll try my best to do better.【解析】1. 接著正文寫下來(lái)，將所給要點(diǎn)翻譯出來(lái)，分三部分來(lái)寫，寫出“三年所得、三年所失、未來(lái)的打算。2. 先翻譯關(guān)鍵詞再來(lái)組句。在過(guò)去In the past，學(xué)到了很多知識(shí)learn a lot of knowledge, 對(duì)某人感激be grateful to sb, 對(duì)我們的老師感激be grateful to our teachers，和同學(xué)相處得很好get on well with my classmates, 互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助help each other and learn from each students, 盡自己最大的努力try my best to do, 上學(xué)遲到be late for school不太愛(ài)好體育運(yùn)動(dòng)I am not good at sports，在未來(lái)In the future…，簡(jiǎn)要寫出自己對(duì)未來(lái)的規(guī)劃。3. 由于前面所提三年所得、三年所失皆為過(guò)去，所以時(shí)態(tài)上要用一般過(guò)去式，最后一