【文章內容簡介】 id, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學們介紹一本自己讀過的好書。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：A good book can……，My Life Story by Helen Keller is……，It is about……，we should……，we are supposed to……，let’s read……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我讀過的一本好書的名字，接下來介紹我讀這本書的時間，所讀的內容以及閱讀這本書的原因，最后鼓勵大家多讀好書。此處by doingsth, e across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。2．Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce s解析：Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．I think they will enjoy their time here． I’m looking forward to your ing．Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國懷特學校的校長Green 先生寫一封信，介紹他們學校的學生來你校參觀時的活動安排以及理由。通過審題可知，這篇作文的主要內容有以下幾個方面：首先介紹不少于兩個關于中國文化的活動，如打乒乓球、包餃子等；然后敘述安排這樣的活動的理由。根據表達要點充實寫作內容，使文意完整。整篇作文應主要使用一般現在時態(tài)，根據表達的需要使用適當的人稱，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。而應從句子的整體結構考慮，使用恰當的詞匯和句型。句式表達以簡單句為基礎，穿插復合句，如賓語從句、定語從句等，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文內容完整，符合題目要求。短文主要分三段，第一段對懷特學校學生們的到來表示歡迎（題目給出），然后作者一句話引出了文章的主題，Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．。第二段是文章的主體部分，這一段中介紹了學校的活動安排：打乒乓球和包餃子，并闡述了安排這些活動的理由。這一段占篇幅最大，里面使用了較豐富的句式，如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導原因狀語從句；All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動詞不定式作目的狀語；In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。最后一段作者用一句話表達了自己的期望。整篇文章結構合理、層次清晰，語句表達準確，意思連貫。3．As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer t解析：As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談談我對現代通訊工具的使用及看法。【詳解】結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點和缺點是什么，以及使用現代通訊工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號召大家合理使用現代通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。4．Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has解析：Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a piic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it39。s being difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．【解析】這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了大量短語，例如in the past few years，lots of，a number of，open parks，have a piic，have fun，on weekends and holidays，more and more，both …and，deal with the problem，in the future等。而More and more people have their own cars and it39。s being difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the and more句式結構的運用，使本文內容豐富，表達流暢，是短文的亮點。點睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據提示內容可知用現在完成時和一般現在時，可把提示內容結合實際展開合理的想象，把它們拓展成一個個英文句子。還要注意在行文中使用一些常見的短語，會給習作增色。5．It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. S解析：It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內容應包含