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18.(北京中考模擬)假如你叫李華,學(xué)校英語廣播站正在招募主持人。請(qǐng)你用英文給負(fù)責(zé)的老師 Sam 寫一封自薦信,內(nèi)容包括:你的基本信息,想做主持人的理由,以及具體打算做的事情。提示詞語: like, improve, help, introduce, share提示問題: ● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station (英語廣播站). __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua19.(山西中考模擬)書面表達(dá)年5月18-19日,習(xí)近平總書記在全國(guó)生態(tài)環(huán)境保護(hù)大會(huì)中,指出要加快構(gòu)建生態(tài)文明體系,要全面推動(dòng)綠色發(fā)展。作為一名鄂州籍的中學(xué)生,你的家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)境怎么樣?發(fā)生了什么樣的變化?要推動(dòng)鄂州的綠色發(fā)展,作為一名中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該做些什么?請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上三個(gè)內(nèi)容,寫一篇80—100詞的作文,作文中不要出現(xiàn)自己的學(xué)校和個(gè)人姓名。20.(全國(guó)中考模擬)每位同學(xué)都希望成為班級(jí)中受歡迎的人。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語短文,談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫龅?。?duì)待集體積極參加各項(xiàng)活動(dòng), 注重細(xì)節(jié),工作高標(biāo)準(zhǔn),……對(duì)待他人尊重老師、與同學(xué)相處融洽, 為別人保守秘密, ……對(duì)待自己嚴(yán)于律已,努力學(xué)習(xí),不輕易放棄,謙虛有禮……要求:1.詞數(shù)100左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Being a Popular StudentWe all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記,請(qǐng)不要?jiǎng)h除一、初中英語書面表達(dá)1.Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for wo解析:Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如on the street,a good idea,as we know,help sb. do sth.,save energy,what’s more,park bikes,in wrong places,once in a while,be careful,at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2.How Can We Protect Ourselves?Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. Bu解析:How Can We Protect Ourselves?Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is ing, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.【解析】這篇作文要求我們以How can we protect ourselves為題,談一談青少年在日常生活中應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)自己。這是一篇話題作文,文章中只給出了寫作的題目,而未給出具體的內(nèi)容,因此首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)結(jié)合自己的日常生活,發(fā)揮想象力,先列出文章具體內(nèi)容的提綱,然后根據(jù)題綱來組織語言,最后成文。這樣的題目是有點(diǎn)難度的,但也一定程度上放開了學(xué)生的思維,學(xué)生們可以根據(jù)自己所想來寫作,而不用受到內(nèi)容的限制。寫之前,要注意確定文章應(yīng)使用的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,通過分析可知,這篇作文應(yīng)以第一人稱we為主,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來敘述。注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí),應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,以主謂賓和主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ),寫出正確的句子,然后為提升文章檔次,使用幾個(gè)較復(fù)雜的句型,如復(fù)合句、非謂語動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)等等。還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接,使用一些短語、副詞等,使整篇文章意思連貫。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求,并且內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整,表達(dá)清楚、明了。作者從三個(gè)方面講述了自己的看法,這幾個(gè)方面都非常符合實(shí)際,所提建議很合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、第一人稱為主,語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確,符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型,如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves ;再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.中非謂語動(dòng)詞的使用。文章各部分之間使用了較好的連接成分,如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等,這些詞匯和短語的使用讓文章具有連貫性。3.It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our解析:It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it wit