【文章內容簡介】 __________________________________________________20．寫作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動。為了倡導中學生接近大自然，某中學生英文報舉辦了一次征文活動，請你根據(jù)以下問題，用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【參考答案】***試卷處理標記，請不要刪除一、英語書面表達1．C解析：　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. 　　How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫作的內容，我們應將這些內容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。2．G解析：Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book39。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was selfconfident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己讀過的一本書。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一，三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和過去時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。3．A解析：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學參與討論，寫出他們的觀點及自己的觀點。因為是敘述同學的現(xiàn)在的觀點，所以句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述同學的觀點用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：do a survey about sth關于某事做調查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子?？键c：材料作文。4．C解析：Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，具有條理性。5．D解析：例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly,