【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 lo!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記，請(qǐng)不要?jiǎng)h除一、英語書面表達(dá)1．H解析：My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來發(fā)生的變化。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，并對(duì)將來提出兩點(diǎn)希望。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫過去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對(duì)將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。表達(dá)時(shí)，需要注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語句，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型來表達(dá)。注意句式的多變，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。語句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。文章是按照時(shí)間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過去的面貌，這一部分使用了過去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動(dòng)詞都變成了過去式，形式準(zhǔn)確。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。最后對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達(dá)了自己的愿望。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。文章中語言得體，語句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。2．C解析：例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個(gè)城市的飛行時(shí)常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關(guān)信息，要求考生對(duì)每個(gè)信息進(jìn)行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對(duì)常用的英語句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語的表達(dá)方式。避免漢語式英語。句型不要都用簡(jiǎn)單句。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個(gè)信息都進(jìn)行比較，不要有漏掉。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對(duì)于城市A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。對(duì)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)則重點(diǎn)突出，因?yàn)樵诔鞘蠥可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。在比較的時(shí)候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時(shí)，直接用比較級(jí)“higher”在說旅館時(shí)用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時(shí)，用了“as…as”等。在說選擇城市A的原因時(shí)，用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。3．B解析：Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動(dòng)自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知，本文主要以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來，不要遺漏任何一個(gè)，書寫時(shí)一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。觀點(diǎn)分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點(diǎn)。并注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分。考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。4．D解析：I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here． As a fifteenyearold boy， my dream is to be a good teacher． To make my dream e true， I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects． Also， I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much， and I really enjoy sports． At school， I always follow the school rules， so I am popular with my classmates and teachers． On weekends， I39。d like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That39。s all． Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開展“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng)，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作過程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達(dá)出來，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn)，注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。5．E解析：With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材