【正文】 sed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價(jià)報(bào)告。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。寫作時(shí)注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。 7．Dear PeterHow is it going?I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volu解析：Dear PeterHow is it going?I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volunteer for a better environment. We’ll go to the park near our school at 9 o’clock on Sunday morning.We’ll pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. If you decide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.I’m looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，寫作要點(diǎn)為：1. 志愿者活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。2. 活動(dòng)中做些什么。3. 建議彼得為這次活動(dòng)做哪些準(zhǔn)備。然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)為主。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。8．Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. T解析：Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful.Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.Yours FaithfullyJack【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你所在的小區(qū)正在進(jìn)行“模范家庭”的評選活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。would like to do想做某事； respect each other 彼此尊重； get along well with sb與某人相處融洽；volunteer to help people in 9．Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the gian解析：Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.【解析】試題分析：本文以＂遇見美＂為主題的短文，談?wù)勆钪杏鲆娒赖囊淮谓?jīng)歷，所以句子的主語是第一人稱單數(shù)，句子的謂語動(dòng)詞用一般過去時(shí)，要注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要注意上下文的銜接，用自己熟悉的短語和句式。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give ；用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the 。10．Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。 Speaking解析：Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。 Speaking Online Test with you. I think it is necessary for us to take the listening and speaking test. In the test, you need to listen and choose the best answer and you will listen and answer the questions. Next, you’ll listen and take notes and then you will listen and retell the passage according to the notes. Finally, you’ll read a passage aloud. If you want to improve your listening and speaking, you should listen more and read aloud. At the same time, you’d better pay more attention to your pronunciation. What’s more, you can practice retelling. It is a good idea to retell the passage that you’ve just learnt. Practice makes perfect. Wish you success. Thank you for listening.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，為初一初二的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們做聽說機(jī)考的經(jīng)驗(yàn)介紹。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m glad that……，I think……，If you want to……，you’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我對英語聽說機(jī)考的認(rèn)識，接下來介紹你們在考試中需要做什么，最后給出一些建議。此處share sth with sb, need to do sth, take notes, want to do sth, at the same time, pay attention to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。11．As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When some解析：As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no broth