【正文】 ng habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇議論文，論點(diǎn)是：在我們自己的事情上，我們應(yīng)該自己做決定，還是由家長來做決定。關(guān)于這個話題每個人都會有自己的看法，題目要求我們?nèi)芜x一個觀點(diǎn)來講述，并結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，給出2到3個理由。寫作之前，我們應(yīng)先從正方和反方中選擇一個，作為自己的觀點(diǎn)，然后圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的理由。這是一篇話題作文，題目中并沒有給我們規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，結(jié)合自己的日常生活來組織語言，豐富文章的內(nèi)容。寫作時還應(yīng)注意的是語言的表達(dá)，英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，我們不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯，而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型，多用簡單句，如主謂賓、主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)，點(diǎn)綴幾個復(fù)合句或并列句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，讓文章的句子富于變化，有新鮮感。高級句型或詞匯的使用也可以提升文章的檔次，在語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意表達(dá)連貫、流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點(diǎn)，第一句話先點(diǎn)明自己的觀點(diǎn)是什么，接下來圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述，并從自己的經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，闡述了自己持有這一觀點(diǎn)的理由，充分、合理，有說服力。最后一段作者重申自己的觀點(diǎn)，并進(jìn)行了總結(jié)。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)、人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。句式表達(dá)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，簡單句為主，也使用了較多的復(fù)合句和高級句型，如狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞等。有些句子較長，是由于使用高級句型所致，一味使用較長的句子也會導(dǎo)致文章的冗長，讓讀者感覺比較累，因此要注意調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句型和短語有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal 。10．Wele to our school!I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with y解析：Wele to our school!I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。要求是給七年級新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議，所以人稱主要用第二人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。在寫作過程中，首先要將所提供給的信息要點(diǎn)用英語正確的表達(dá)出來，要涵蓋所提到的所有要點(diǎn)，同時注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同時在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。11．Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since解析：Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報》投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。前兩個內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達(dá)，而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達(dá)出來，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達(dá)流暢。12．Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junio解析：Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junior schools. In our school there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and improving my skills, they also free me from the heavy work of study.Here I have some suggestions. To students, we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us。 Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework.Dear friends, please actively take part in afteractivities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning.【解析】這篇作文要求寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意如果主語是第三人稱單數(shù)的時候，謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。13．A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is解析：A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all