【正文】 and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。文章可分為三段，第一段表明寫(xiě)信的目的；第二段分析感謝的具體原因；第三段寫(xiě)出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。亮點(diǎn)分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.[高分句型一]I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English. 我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記，當(dāng)我用英語(yǔ)和別人交流困難時(shí)，你主動(dòng)提出幫助我。句子中有when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣，這讓我想起了一句話(huà)：“天下之大, 家最美好?！?其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。8．How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myse解析：How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was not good at sports. Sometimes I was late for school. The teachers were very angry with me.In the future, I will have more sports and try to plan my time carefully. I’ll try my best to do better.【解析】1. 接著正文寫(xiě)下來(lái)，將所給要點(diǎn)翻譯出來(lái)，分三部分來(lái)寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)出“三年所得、三年所失、未來(lái)的打算。2. 先翻譯關(guān)鍵詞再來(lái)組句。在過(guò)去In the past，學(xué)到了很多知識(shí)learn a lot of knowledge, 對(duì)某人感激be grateful to sb, 對(duì)我們的老師感激be grateful to our teachers，和同學(xué)相處得很好get on well with my classmates, 互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助help each other and learn from each students, 盡自己最大的努力try my best to do, 上學(xué)遲到be late for school不太愛(ài)好體育運(yùn)動(dòng)I am not good at sports，在未來(lái)In the future…，簡(jiǎn)要寫(xiě)出自己對(duì)未來(lái)的規(guī)劃。3. 由于前面所提三年所得、三年所失皆為過(guò)去，所以時(shí)態(tài)上要用一般過(guò)去式，最后一項(xiàng)對(duì)將來(lái)的規(guī)劃，用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。4. 最后一項(xiàng)對(duì)未來(lái)的規(guī)劃，既是對(duì)所得所失的理解，也是對(duì)未來(lái)的展望。5. 寫(xiě)句子時(shí)要注意人稱(chēng)和數(shù)要一致。9．As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoidthe t解析：As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoidthe traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a fortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can alsosave the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city.【解析】本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述。實(shí)際上就是要求書(shū)寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)。人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采。高分句型一：We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. 通過(guò)騎自行車(chē)或步行，這樣就可以避免交通阻塞，減少空氣污染。and是并列連詞，連接的是兩個(gè)相同的謂語(yǔ)，by是介詞，意思是通過(guò)某組織方式。高分句型二：In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活中，無(wú)論我走到哪里，我會(huì)撿垃圾，把垃圾放進(jìn)垃圾箱里。pick up是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是撿起，put into是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是放進(jìn)wherever引導(dǎo)的是讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，從句的意思是無(wú)論我到哪里。10．Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For exam解析：Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了大量短語(yǔ)，例如in our life，may be，something unpleasant，for example，fail in，laugh at，why not，cheer up，help sb. to do，get closer to，each other等。同時(shí)Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，可把提示內(nèi)容結(jié)合實(shí)際展開(kāi)合理的想象，把它們翻譯拓展成一個(gè)個(gè)英文句子。還要注意在行文中使用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)，會(huì)給習(xí)作增色。11．It’s important to be polite to other people, whether we are at home or abroad. If other people are解析：It’s important to be polite to other people, whether we are at home or abroad. If other people are friendly and polite to us, we will feel happy. So other people will want us to be friendly and polite, too. On a plane, if a flight attendant gives us good service, we should express our thanks to her or him. If she or he is busy, we should wait for our turn to be served. If there is a queue waiting at the ticket office, we should join the queue instead of going to the front of it. In public places, we should obey the rules and not make other people feel upset. Anyway, if you want to receive smile, you should smile first. So always be polite, and our world will be full of sunshine.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文及命題作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。12．Friday May 27th, SunnyI’m feeling a little unhappy while I am writing this because I am解析：Friday May 27th, SunnyI’m feeling a little unhappy while I am writing this because I am going to return to China. I lived in Tom’s home in America when I studied in America. Though we had only studied together for a term, we were good friends. Tom is kind, friendly and helpful. We got on well with each other. He did a lot to help me with my English. My English has improved greatly with his help. I know more American culture. I really appreciate what he did for me. His parents took good care of me. They tried to