【正文】 紹了關(guān)于足球的常識(shí)，接下來(lái)介紹踢足球的好處以及我的偶像，最后介紹我的夢(mèng)想。此處have a very long history, all over the world, take place, take part in, what’s more, be good for, have a gift for等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoidthe t解析：As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoidthe traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a fortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can alsosave the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city.【解析】本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述。實(shí)際上就是要求書(shū)寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)。人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采。高分句型一：We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. 通過(guò)騎自行車(chē)或步行，這樣就可以避免交通阻塞，減少空氣污染。and是并列連詞，連接的是兩個(gè)相同的謂語(yǔ)，by是介詞，意思是通過(guò)某組織方式。高分句型二：In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活中，無(wú)論我走到哪里，我會(huì)撿垃圾，把垃圾放進(jìn)垃圾箱里。pick up是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是撿起，put into是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是放進(jìn)wherever引導(dǎo)的是讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，從句的意思是無(wú)論我到哪里。10．Dear PeterHow is it going?I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volu解析：Dear PeterHow is it going?I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volunteer for a better environment. We’ll go to the park near our school at 9 o’clock on Sunday morning.We’ll pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. If you decide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.I’m looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問(wèn)題就是寫(xiě)作的基本方向，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)為：1. 志愿者活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。2. 活動(dòng)中做些什么。3. 建議彼得為這次活動(dòng)做哪些準(zhǔn)備。然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)為主。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。11．Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since解析：Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》投稿，談一談自己對(duì)共享單車(chē)的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車(chē)的優(yōu)勢(shì)；存在的問(wèn)題以及你自己對(duì)這件事情的看法。前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語(yǔ)言，并表達(dá)出來(lái)，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段或前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容合到一段。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車(chē)；第二段講述了共享單車(chē)的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段介紹了一些問(wèn)題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以第三人稱(chēng)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、表達(dá)流暢。12．It’s never too late to fulfill my promiseMolly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise解析：It’s never too late to fulfill my promiseMolly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise together. She said that she wanted to go to Hainan with me and see the beautiful scenery when we grow up. I happily agreed.Ten years had passed since I made that promise. However, I didn’t do anything about the promise because I was busy with my study. My mother also disagreed with me. “You should know study is the top priority （首要任務(wù)） for a student. You are just a teenage girl, there’s no way you can go there without an adult’s help.” I always felt upset when my mother said something like this.I talked to Molly about it. “My mother won’t allow me.” I sighed （嘆息）. “It’s a really long way. What should we do?” said Molly. “I don’t know.” I replied, “But we can make a plan by choosing a perfect time first.”“I’d like to set off when the summer holiday begins,” she said. “We can go there with both our parents. I want us to go there together. Just the way I have promised you.” I said.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，將“It’s never too late to ...”補(bǔ)充完整，并以此為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Molly and I used to……，She said that……，I didn’t do……，I talked to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想長(zhǎng)大了去海南看美麗的風(fēng)景，接下來(lái)介紹我一直想做這件事，但沒(méi)能實(shí)現(xiàn)的原因，最后介紹我下一步的計(jì)劃。此處used to do sth, want to do sth, grow up, be busy with, by doing sth, set off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。13．How to Deal with the Exam StressEveryone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a解析：How to Deal with the Exam StressEveryone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．However，if we have too heavy stress，we can39。t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．In my opinion，to deal with stress，we39。d better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and health