【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 節(jié)日端午節(jié)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I learn from your letter that……，I’m happy to……，The festival has a history of……，These two are……，we all love……，I hope that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表達(dá)了我很高興向你介紹端午節(jié)，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的歷史，日期，慶祝活動(dòng)，特色食物和目的，最后表達(dá)我的感受。此處want to do sth, share sth with sb, according to, in a word, look back, get together等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。2．Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce s解析：Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．I think they will enjoy their time here． I’m looking forward to your ing．Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國懷特學(xué)校的校長Green 先生寫一封信，介紹他們學(xué)校的學(xué)生來你校參觀時(shí)的活動(dòng)安排以及理由。通過審題可知，這篇作文的主要內(nèi)容有以下幾個(gè)方面：首先介紹不少于兩個(gè)關(guān)于中國文化的活動(dòng)，如打乒乓球、包餃子等；然后敘述安排這樣的活動(dòng)的理由。根據(jù)表達(dá)要點(diǎn)充實(shí)寫作內(nèi)容，使文意完整。整篇作文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型。句式表達(dá)以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、定語從句等，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。短文主要分三段，第一段對懷特學(xué)校學(xué)生們的到來表示歡迎（題目給出），然后作者一句話引出了文章的主題，Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．。第二段是文章的主體部分，這一段中介紹了學(xué)校的活動(dòng)安排：打乒乓球和包餃子，并闡述了安排這些活動(dòng)的理由。這一段占篇幅最大，里面使用了較豐富的句式，如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語；In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。最后一段作者用一句話表達(dá)了自己的期望。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理、層次清晰，語句表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫。3．There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Midautumn Festival and it usual解析：There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Midautumn Festival and it usually es on August 15 of the lunar year. On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily. I like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members.【解析】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)話題要求來介紹一下中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。根據(jù)所提供的提示詞語可知，要求介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日：中秋節(jié)?？梢詮哪阕钕矚g的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是中秋節(jié)，節(jié)日里你通常都做什么，以及你為什么喜歡中秋節(jié)三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意在給報(bào)社的投稿中必須包含提示詞語中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語把所給的提示問題回答清楚就行。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縊n the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在節(jié)日里，我們會(huì)從不同的地方回家，和全家團(tuán)聚，一起吃大餐。由and連接的并列句。【高分句型二】I like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜歡中秋節(jié)，不僅因?yàn)槲蚁矚g美味的月餅，而且因?yàn)樗且粋€(gè)家庭聚會(huì)時(shí)間，我真的很享受家庭成員之間的愛。句子中運(yùn)用了not only…… but also……，還有because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。4．The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If解析：The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。要求以The person I want to thank為題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：誰是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學(xué)到了什么？根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱和第三人稱。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。另外，可以用上一些句型、短語，較高級的語言，這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。5．As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer t解析：As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么，以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。6．Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic（樂觀的）about tour envi解析：Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic（樂觀的）about tour environment in ten years．In fact，they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.However，other students are worried about the future．They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.．Therefore，we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyon