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要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、要點(diǎn)齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密;本文還采用了豐富的句型,比如:It is +形容詞+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。5.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂(lè)。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺(tái),生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你為??⒄Z(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫(xiě)一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?,分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷,并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語(yǔ):powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing提示問(wèn)題:Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式,采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái),注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě),有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。6.2019年2月20日,中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時(shí)代楷?!狈Q號(hào)。時(shí)代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛(ài)國(guó)、敬業(yè)、誠(chéng)信、友善”的價(jià)值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“向時(shí)代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?,以及這樣做的意義。提示詞語(yǔ):pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問(wèn)題:● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. 【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作,但寫(xiě)作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫(xiě),寫(xiě)作時(shí)承接短文開(kāi)頭,具體寫(xiě)出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是一段式,人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式,時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述具體怎么做時(shí),描寫(xiě)細(xì)致,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):protect the environment;pick up the rubbish;behave well;be kind to sb;more and more beautiful。句型:By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。7.為了吸引外國(guó)游客,杭州旅游網(wǎng)希望對(duì)杭州茶文化進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格信息,用英語(yǔ)為其寫(xiě)一篇介紹,詞數(shù)80左右。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________