【文章內容簡介】 y classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是：你們學校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來為?？陡?，談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個提綱，具體的寫作內容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來充實完成。因此首先我們要仔細思考這個問題，結合自己的真實生活，想一想平時是怎么做的，應該怎么做。這是寫作中的一個難點。另外一個難點是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達出來，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型，每個句子應以簡單句為基礎，如主謂賓結構或主系表結構，然后再變化成較高級、復雜是句型，如復合句、非謂語動詞形式等。另外還應注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當的連詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整、充實。作者根據題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內容非常真實。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現在時態(tài)來敘述，符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范，句式表達符合英語的習慣。文章中以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調整文章結構，使用復雜句型、短文和較高級的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。9．（江蘇揚州教育學院附中中考模擬）你校正在舉辦以“社會主義核心價值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽，你準備從“和善”這一點展開論述，請根據提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語演講稿。要求： 1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數：100詞左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會主義核心價值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽，你準備從“和善”這一點展開論述，請根據提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語演講稿。內容要求中指出了寫作要點，動筆前一定要認真閱讀內容要點，根據內容要點組織材料，確定句子人稱，時態(tài)等問題?？梢韵劝迅饕c用句子表達出來，然后再組合成文。寫作中注意語意通順，符合邏輯關系，為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性，在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢時，可以適當使用序數詞。舉出的例子要有說服力，想象合理并適當發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點。注意采用一些習慣的句式，固定短語，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫完后多讀幾遍，適當修改。【點睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。10．（北京中考模擬）某英文網站正在開展以“我最喜歡的中華傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談你最喜歡的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是什么，節(jié)日里你通常都做什么，以及你為什么喜歡這個節(jié)日。提示詞語:festival，get together, enjoy，moon cakes，harvest time提示問題: What39。s your favorite traditional festival? What do you usually do during the festival? Why do you like it?There are many traditional festivals in 【答案】There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Midautumn Festival and it usually es on August 15 of the lunar year. On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily. I like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members.【解析】這是一篇話題作文，根據話題要求來介紹一下中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。根據所提供的提示詞語可知，要求介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日：中秋節(jié)。可以從你最喜歡的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是中秋節(jié)，節(jié)日里你通常都做什么，以及你為什么喜歡中秋節(jié)三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意在給報社的投稿中必須包含提示詞語中的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語把所給的提示問題回答清楚就行。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縊n the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在節(jié)日里，我們會從不同的地方回家，和全家團聚，一起吃大餐。由and連接的并列句。【高分句型二】I like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜歡中秋節(jié)，不僅因為我喜歡美味的月餅，而且因為它是一個家庭聚會時間，我真的很享受家庭成員之間的愛。句子中運用了not only…… but also……，還有because引導的原因狀語從句。11．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。你的美國網友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。請你向他發(fā)出邀請，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。提示詞語：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a piic 提示問題：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there? What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。本題根據提示內容應該用一般現在時，邀請對方并給出建議，需使用表達邀請和用于提建議的相關短語和句式，注意長短搭配，并在行文中增加細節(jié)和過渡，使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認真分析提示要點，理解要點要表達的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累和寫作練習以外，還應該適當背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a piic