【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 y classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫(xiě)作背景是：你們學(xué)校英文報(bào)刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來(lái)為?？陡澹勔徽勅绾蝿?chuàng)建一個(gè)和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開(kāi)放性的作文，題目中只給出了話(huà)題和大概的一個(gè)提綱，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)充實(shí)完成。因此首先我們要仔細(xì)思考這個(gè)問(wèn)題，結(jié)合自己的真實(shí)生活，想一想平時(shí)是怎么做的，應(yīng)該怎么做。這是寫(xiě)作中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。另外一個(gè)難點(diǎn)是使用正確的英語(yǔ)將自己的所想表達(dá)出來(lái)，英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應(yīng)從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，每個(gè)句子應(yīng)以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，然后再變化成較高級(jí)、復(fù)雜是句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式等。另外還應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)句之間的連接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級(jí)發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實(shí)。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章中以第一人稱(chēng)為主、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述，符合題目要求。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣。文章中以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用復(fù)雜句型、短文和較高級(jí)的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。9．（江蘇揚(yáng)州教育學(xué)院附中中考模擬）你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀(guān)”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀(guān)”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定句子人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)等問(wèn)題?？梢韵劝迅饕c(diǎn)用句子表達(dá)出來(lái)，然后再組合成文。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性，在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)時(shí)，可以適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞。舉出的例子要有說(shuō)服力，想象合理并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意采用一些習(xí)慣的句式，固定短語(yǔ)，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫(xiě)完后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。10．（北京中考模擬）某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“我最喜歡的中華傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阕钕矚g的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是什么，節(jié)日里你通常都做什么，以及你為什么喜歡這個(gè)節(jié)日。提示詞語(yǔ):festival，get together, enjoy，moon cakes，harvest time提示問(wèn)題: What39。s your favorite traditional festival? What do you usually do during the festival? Why do you like it?There are many traditional festivals in 【答案】There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Midautumn Festival and it usually es on August 15 of the lunar year. On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily. I like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members.【解析】這是一篇話(huà)題作文，根據(jù)話(huà)題要求來(lái)介紹一下中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。根據(jù)所提供的提示詞語(yǔ)可知，要求介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日：中秋節(jié)?？梢詮哪阕钕矚g的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是中秋節(jié)，節(jié)日里你通常都做什么，以及你為什么喜歡中秋節(jié)三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。注意在給報(bào)社的投稿中必須包含提示詞語(yǔ)中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)把所給的提示問(wèn)題回答清楚就行。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縊n the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在節(jié)日里，我們會(huì)從不同的地方回家，和全家團(tuán)聚，一起吃大餐。由and連接的并列句?！靖叻志湫投縄 like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜歡中秋節(jié)，不僅因?yàn)槲蚁矚g美味的月餅，而且因?yàn)樗且粋€(gè)家庭聚會(huì)時(shí)間，我真的很享受家庭成員之間的愛(ài)。句子中運(yùn)用了not only…… but also……，還有because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。11．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。請(qǐng)你向他發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。提示詞語(yǔ)：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a piic 提示問(wèn)題：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there? What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。本題根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方并給出建議，需使用表達(dá)邀請(qǐng)和用于提建議的相關(guān)短語(yǔ)和句式，注意長(zhǎng)短搭配，并在行文中增加細(xì)節(jié)和過(guò)渡，使文章讀起來(lái)比較流暢。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析提示要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累和寫(xiě)作練習(xí)以外，還應(yīng)該適當(dāng)背誦一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a piic