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e so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析:審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn),其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn),發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確,注意正確使用連詞,借助實(shí)例、實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)來佐證自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn):首先用一個(gè)自然段來闡明寫作的主題,表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)(認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的),可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。其次,開始具體陳述觀點(diǎn),陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例,相關(guān)用到的短語有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難,review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí),think over the difficulties來回思考難點(diǎn),Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少,例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個(gè)諺語。最后可以用說理的方式來介紹做作業(yè)的必要性,例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能,在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn),就是說作業(yè)也要有變化性,要豐富多彩,體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考,總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。5.環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé), 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源,相信我們的家園會(huì)越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說明文寫作,寫作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述建議時(shí),描寫具體,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語:save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。以及狀語從句等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。6.2019年2月20日,中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時(shí)代楷?!狈Q號(hào)。時(shí)代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價(jià)值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時(shí)代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?,以及這樣做的意義。提示詞語:pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問題:● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. 【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫,寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭,具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是一段式,人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式,時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述具體怎么做時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語:protect the environment;pick up the rubbish;behave well;be kind to sb;more and more beautiful。句型:By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。7.書面