【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 od for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們觀察圖片，將圖片中發(fā)生的場(chǎng)景用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，是一篇看圖作文。首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，了解圖片中發(fā)生的場(chǎng)景，弄清楚它主要想傳達(dá)的意思，然后用英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括兩個(gè)部分：首先要描述圖片中發(fā)生的事情；其次對(duì)該事情闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，第三人稱來(lái)敘述，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合圖片表達(dá)的意思，不能會(huì)錯(cuò)意，寫(xiě)偏、寫(xiě)錯(cuò)；可以根據(jù)圖片信息適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章更加充實(shí)、完整。其次要注意英語(yǔ)句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。用從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫(xiě)完整的句子。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文水平，應(yīng)注意應(yīng)用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞?，使文意連貫、自然。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求以及圖片信息，介紹了圖片中發(fā)生的事情，并對(duì)這件事發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，作者通過(guò)觀察圖片，正確了解了圖片傳達(dá)的信息，確定了文章的中心。文章內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述清晰、有層次。作者觀點(diǎn)明確，理由充分。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第三人稱來(lái)敘述，正確使用了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式，注意了過(guò)去式，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。最后短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句交替應(yīng)用，文章富有節(jié)奏的變化。短文中還使用了豐富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、But I think it is not proper to pare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting 。9．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)校園安全問(wèn)題越來(lái)越受到重視，為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長(zhǎng)和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長(zhǎng)和老師。這四個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。本文是提建議，因此用shouldn’t或should來(lái)寫(xiě)。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。本句話是由and連接的并列句。【高分句型二】I think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。10．（山東中考模擬）每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長(zhǎng)，作為初中生的你，你感覺(jué)自已比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化?請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇文章描述一下你認(rèn)為最明顯的變化。要點(diǎn)包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我最大的個(gè)人變化是喜歡上讀書(shū)，接下來(lái)介紹我小時(shí)候不喜歡讀書(shū)，最后指出現(xiàn)在書(shū)籍是我的朋友。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開(kāi)了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕āF(tuán)隊(duì)旅游◆有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識(shí)朋友，互相幫助個(gè)人旅游◆自由安排時(shí)間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)；◆學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己你的想法……注意事項(xiàng)：1．文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游travel with a group 個(gè)人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide39。s help, they won39。t get lost and they don39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What39。s more, it39。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談?wù)勛约簩?duì)不同的旅游方式的看法。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺