【正文】 nt. He is good at studying and ready to help others so he gets on well with his classmates.Last week a new student called Wang Gang came to his class and Mr. Zhang made him sit next to Li Lei. But Wang Gang is weak in learning and loves talking in class. This made teachers angry Some of the students wouldn’t like to make friends with him. But Li Lei helps him study and stops him talking nonsense in class. After some time, they made great progress together.If I share a desk with this slow student like Wang Gang, I will help him patiently and learn from each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，介紹李磊如何幫助差生王剛以及如果你的身邊有和王剛一樣的差生，你會如何做。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be good at, be ready to do, get on well with, be weak in, make friends with, make great progress, share with, learn from以及過去分詞作后置定語。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。16．（湖北中考模擬）學會自我保護是青少年需要具備的一種意識和能力。請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合自己的觀點，以＂How Can We Protect Ourselves?＂為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文，談談在生活中青少年應該怎樣自我保護（selfprotection）。提示：1. never swim alone。2. be careful to make friends。3. call the police when you are in danger。4. eat healthy food。5. don’t crowd（go upstairs and downstairs）. 要求：1. 句子結構準確，要點齊全，內容合理，篇章結構連貫；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名、地名。How Can We Protect Ourselves?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves?Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is ing, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.【解析】這篇作文要求我們以How can we protect ourselves為題，談一談青少年在日常生活中應該如何保護自己。這是一篇話題作文，文章中只給出了寫作的題目，而未給出具體的內容，因此首先學生們應結合自己的日常生活，發(fā)揮想象力，先列出文章具體內容的提綱，然后根據(jù)題綱來組織語言，最后成文。這樣的題目是有點難度的，但也一定程度上放開了學生的思維，學生們可以根據(jù)自己所想來寫作，而不用受到內容的限制。寫之前，要注意確定文章應使用的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇作文應以第一人稱we為主，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述。注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的，以主謂賓和主系表的結構為基礎，寫出正確的句子，然后為提升文章檔次，使用幾個較復雜的句型，如復合句、非謂語動詞、被動結構等等。還應注意語句之間的連接，使用一些短語、副詞等，使整篇文章意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容符合題目要求，并且內容充實、完整，表達清楚、明了。作者從三個方面講述了自己的看法，這幾個方面都非常符合實際，所提建議很合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)、第一人稱為主，語法規(guī)范、準確，符合英語的表達習慣。文章里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves ；再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.中非謂語動詞的使用。文章各部分之間使用了較好的連接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，這些詞匯和短語的使用讓文章具有連貫性。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達隨著黃石“創(chuàng)建文明城市活動”（簡稱“創(chuàng)文活動”）（“civilized city” campaign）的開展許多學校的師生走上街頭清理垃圾、小廣告,撿拾綠化帶中的垃圾,倡導文明出行,以飽滿熱情共赴“文明之約”,請你就此寫一篇短文談談你的看法。內容包括:,談談我市“創(chuàng)文活動”前后的情況（過去如何,現(xiàn)在如何）“創(chuàng)文活動”出力提兩點建議。作文要求::不得在作中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名.,記數(shù)80個左右。作文開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù).Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. And it has changed a lot. In the past, lots of rubbish could be seen around us. Thanks to the campaign, the streets look much cleaner now. What’s more, there used to be many people breaking the traffic rules. But now we can find more policemen in the streets who warn people to obey traffic rules and the traffic is no longer in a mess. As students we are supposed to follow the traffic rules strictly. Besides we can serve as volunteers to help clean the city. With everybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動，要求談談自己的看法。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。18．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達初中生即將結束，學校英語俱樂部特邀你寫一篇英語短文，給七年級新生的學習生活提幾點建議。 內容要點如下：，好的學習方法很重要；，保持健康；，使學校生活豐富；，多交朋友；。注意:，不計入總詞數(shù)。，詞數(shù)80詞左右。參考詞匯：method club. n 社團 colorful Wele to our school! 【答案】Wele to our school!I will graduate from my sc