【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 是九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友Billy發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時鍛煉的情況。請你根據(jù)以下信息，給Billy回封電子郵件，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。寫作要點：1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來的體育測試（physical test）做準備。2. 介紹你平時鍛煉的情況：（1）每天鍛煉的時間：不到一個半小時。（2）偶爾不鍛煉的原因：作業(yè)多，沒時間。（3）擅長的體育運動：球類運動。3. 談?wù)勫憻捊o你帶來了哪些好處。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名。2. 可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達準確，條理清晰。4. 至少80詞。Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表示很高興收到Billy的來信，接下來介紹我平時的鍛煉情況，最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)淼暮锰幰约拔医ㄗhBilly要多鍛煉。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（廣州市天河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你對“低碳生活”的認識。提示：1. 出行方式2. 不浪費紙、水、電等3. 其他低碳生活的方式（補充一點）4. 低碳生活的作用注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3．文中不得提及真實的人名等相關(guān)信息。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。 TV sets and lights in time when I don39。t need them. What39。s more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will bee better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let39。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你對“低碳生活”的認識。本文時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱主要為第一人稱。認真閱讀所給提示要點，確定主題，根據(jù)要點列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。節(jié)約我們周圍所有的能源是一種習(xí)慣。保護我們的環(huán)境很重要。首先，我總是步行去上學(xué)，告訴父母步行去上班，而不要開車。其次，當我不需要的時候，我會及時關(guān)掉水龍頭、風(fēng)扇、電視機和電燈，以節(jié)約用水和用電。更重要的是，我們家里的水一直都在重復(fù)利用。第三，我使用紙張的兩面。我認為充分利用紙張是件好事。通過這樣做，我們可以拯救許多樹木。最后，我會帶著籃子購物而不使用塑料袋。我相信如果我們能做這些事情，我們的生活會越來越好。低碳，快樂生活。我們采取行動吧?！军c睛】書面表達要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。語言要規(guī)范，時態(tài)運用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。：要點是否齊全，適當補充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當?shù)取＃鹤⒁鈺鴮懝ふ烙^整潔。10．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）寫作。Having studied in this school for almost three years, you are about to graduate （畢業(yè)）. There must be something that you will always remember. Please write a passage about your Junior school life. The following points should be included.1. How your junior school life is.2. Things/moments that you won’t forget.3. The regrets in the three years.4. Plans for your future.5. A natural ending.【答案】I39。m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.【解析】學(xué)生們已經(jīng)度過了三年的初中生活，在這三年里，一定有一些事是他們無法忘記的。這篇作文要求學(xué)生們介紹一下自己的初中生活。題目中列出了一些要點，如初中生活的感受、難忘的事情或時刻、后悔的事情、未來的計劃，然后再加上一個自然的結(jié)尾。寫作時，我們就可以利用這些要點來組織語言，充實文章的內(nèi)容。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)為主，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。另一個難點是英語表達和漢語習(xí)慣是不一樣的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句式整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型?？梢远嘤煤唵尉?，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)、主系表結(jié)構(gòu)等，點綴一些并列句和復(fù)合句或較高級的句型，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。合理安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，注意語句之間的銜接，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，并且結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理，層次清晰。短文首先介紹了自己對三年初中生活、老師以及同學(xué)們的感受；然后介紹了自己在這三年里后悔的事情；接下來是對未來的計劃以及對老師和同學(xué)們的祝福。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主，謂語動詞形式變化準確，語法規(guī)范，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。短文中長短句結(jié)合，使文章富于變化，有節(jié)奏感。短文中還使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the 。11．（四川中考模擬）書面表達。你向往的高中生活即將開始，你將面對新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境，請根據(jù)下列提示，以“I Expect My Senior High School Life”為題，用英語寫一篇短文environmentclassroom, dining hall, library,…studylearning goals, learning ways,…activitiesduring school time, i