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d, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand : for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth : to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end : also, besides, especially, actually, in fact : all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short 關聯詞 (connection words) Let’s try ? _____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. ? He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert ______. ? We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. ? _____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ____________, he smiled. Though\Although instead like First Next Finally\At last ? How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. ? According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Inter. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. ? Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 連 (connect) According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Inter to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 美 (beautify) And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. Proverb(諺語) /saying 加諺語 (Proverb/saying) 可用于” beginning”和” ending”,多用后者。 方法四 :妙用引文和例子 (多用于 “ the body”) Writing skills(“寫”的技巧) 青少年應盡我們所能保護環(huán)境拯救地球。 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy. 加例子 加例子 在家里,我經常幫助父母親干家務活。 I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on. 結尾:感悟體會 Let’s practice! 例:請以“ ”為題,根據提示寫一次愉快的參觀. Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm wele. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well! At noon we had a piic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We enjoyed ourselves. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers. 范文 A Visit to a Farm 例 – A traffic accident 首段: 首段概括交代事件發(fā)生的時間、地點、人物等信息 A week ago, I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school, which still sticks in my mind. 例 – A traffic accident 中心段: 交待細節(jié),注重在 how。 交待細節(jié)時應注意的事項? ? 過多不必要的細節(jié)會沖淡文章的主題。 例 – A traffic accident中心段賞析 It was about 7:00 on Friday morning, (Oct. 31st).( 補充說明時間 ) I was walking through the pedestrian overpass