【正文】 join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. 扣分原因一詞數(shù)不夠！ Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. Introduction 本人特點 加入目的 扣分原因二 遺漏要點！ Write an Outline Introduction Main body Conclusion { { I am a boy… I’d like to join… 本人特點 “愛心”表現(xiàn) 加入目的 I hope you will agree with me. ? ? ? ? ? 無法拿滿分！ Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin 少了 兩個 重要部分，扣 56分，只得 1112分！ 缺少 “愛心”表現(xiàn) 也缺少 Conclusion “愛心”表現(xiàn) (examples) Picture 1 help…with… help classmates with lessons 我的 I often help classmates with lessons. ? ? 看圖 Picture 2 help…cross… “愛心”表現(xiàn) (examples) 看圖 ? help old people cross the road ? I help old people cross the road on my way home. Picture 3 “愛心”表現(xiàn) (examples) 看圖 give my seat to… ? give my seat to people in need ? I often give my seat to people in need on a bus. “愛心”表現(xiàn) (examples) 看圖 Picture 4 clean up the park ? help clean up the park ? I often help clean up the park. “愛心”表現(xiàn) (examples) 1. I often help classmates with lessons. 2. I help old people cross the road on my way home. 3. I often give my seat to people in need on a bus. 4. I often help clean up the park. Conclusion I’ll be glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me. Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others I get on well with my classmates .If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin I’ll be glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me. and often help classmates with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the road. On a bus, I always give my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park. 不但要點完整了，詞數(shù)也夠了。 姓名 王林 性別 男 本人特點 身體健康；學習刻苦；樂于助人；與同學友好相處 “愛心”表現(xiàn) （見圖片） 加入目的 1.… 2. … 例 要求： 1. 表達清楚 ， 語句通順 ， 意思連貫； 2. 要點須包括表格和四幅圖片中的信息 ，但不得使用真實姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中 “ 加入目的 ” 一欄內(nèi)容由考生自擬； 4. 詞數(shù)： 70左右 。 你