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ery exciting.(三)時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)的錯(cuò)誤: 很多初中生在寫作文時(shí)經(jīng)常犯時(shí)態(tài)的錯(cuò)誤。在寶山區(qū)2007學(xué)年初二年級(jí)質(zhì)量管理考試中有這樣一個(gè)題目:The Coming School Open Day,這里的ing就要求學(xué)生用一般將來時(shí),部分學(xué)生把時(shí)態(tài)寫成過去時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。又以“The Unforgettable Fourteenth Birthday”為題。如:I have (had) an unforgettable fourteenth birthday on May 2nd ,2008 because I get (got) a lot of nice presents from my parents and my friends. First, we go (went) to the Century Park to go boating. Second, we hold (held) a party at home to celebrate my birthday. ……此標(biāo)題是記述一次難忘的生日,很明顯應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)。但是有些學(xué)生時(shí)態(tài)用錯(cuò),這也是學(xué)生作文中常見的錯(cuò)誤。另外,由于與中文的表達(dá)習(xí)慣不同,英語的被動(dòng)體現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)上,學(xué)生如果時(shí)態(tài)掌握不好也經(jīng)常會(huì)犯語態(tài)的錯(cuò)誤。如:〔誤〕Many houses damaged in the big fire a few days ago.〔正〕Many houses were damaged in the fire a few days ago.(四)形式單一,表達(dá)不夠豐富:很多學(xué)生的小作文從頭到尾都是清一色的簡(jiǎn)單句,表達(dá)呆板,句與句之間過渡生硬缺少承上啟下的關(guān)聯(lián)詞。以Thanks to My Parents 為題,試比較以下兩篇范文:(A)I want to thank to my parents. They give me a life. I get much knowledge from them. My father always helps me. I have a good mother. She often cooks delicious food for me. I also tell her many things. I love my parents very much. I hope they will be happy forever.(B) I think I should thank to my parents bec