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amaged in the fire a few days ago.(四)形式單一,表達不夠豐富:很多學(xué)生的小作文從頭到尾都是清一色的簡單句,表達呆板,句與句之間過渡生硬缺少承上啟下的關(guān)聯(lián)詞。但是有些學(xué)生時態(tài)用錯,這也是學(xué)生作文中常見的錯誤。又以“The Unforgettable Fourteenth Birthday”為題。〔誤〕Our English teacher should let us listen to some English songs because they will feel happy and it is very exciting.〔正〕Our English teacher should let us listen to some English songs because we will feel happy and the songs are very exciting.(三)時態(tài)和語態(tài)的錯誤: 很多初中生在寫作文時經(jīng)常犯時態(tài)的錯誤。) 〔誤〕I enjoyed this film. Because it’s very exciting.〔正〕I enjoyed this film because it’s very exciting. (Because 應(yīng)該改為小寫,句號刪掉。) 〔誤〕Neither Tim nor Mary like playing puter games. 〔正〕Neither Tim nor Mary likes playing puter games. (like改為 likes,因為neither…nor連接兩個并列主語時,謂語動詞與臨近的一個主語保持一致。)3.英語句法的錯誤,主要體現(xiàn)在對英語句子結(jié)構(gòu)的理解以及主謂呼應(yīng)和時態(tài)的一致性上。如:〔誤〕Jane wants to be a honest girl. 〔正〕Jane wants to be an honest girl. (冠詞的用法) 〔誤〕My mother is a kindly woman.〔正〕My mother is a kind woman. (形容詞的用法) 〔誤〕We get tired of do our homework.〔正〕We get tired of doing our homework. (介詞后的動詞應(yīng)該是動名詞的形式)〔誤〕Tom is enough tall to reach the books on the