【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 s what we will do．I hope you will choose my plan．Yours，Li Ming【解析】【詳解】初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報“英語角”欄目向同學們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李明，請根據(jù)要點寫一封信，說說你的計劃。本題是一篇圖表作文，信息提示簡潔明了，但是必要的補充和想象是必不可少的，切忌照信息翻譯句子，必須通過適當?shù)倪B詞保證文章通順，就本題而言，介紹三項活動時，要有必要的順序詞．【點睛】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,如：After that，one of the students will read a thankyou letter to all the people who have helped us；In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。7．（天津中考模擬）書面表達，星期五早上在上學的路上目睹了一起交通事故。根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。時間星期五早上七點地點中山路和幸福大街交口事故過程。，司機撥打120求助。，女孩并無大礙。事故原因女孩騎車時闖紅燈，因此她對事故負有責任。你的建議如何做到安全出行（補充兩點具體做法）參考詞匯：檢查make an examination 對……負責 be responsible for sth.要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個.（2）短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was a traffic accident at the intersection of Zhongshan Road and Happiness Street．I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. At the same time, a car was ing. It was going very fast and when he noticed the girl. He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. So the car hit the bike and the girl fell down. The driver called 120 and they sent the girl to the hospital. But fortunately, after making an examination, the girl was all right. The girl was still riding while the light is red, so she was responsible for the accident．We should pay attention to safety when crossing the also should obey the traffic rules.【解析】【詳解】首先這是一篇以一般過去時為主的文章，所以要注意時態(tài)。重點詞匯短語：traffic accident交通事故；across the road過馬路；suddenly突然地；At the same time同時；fell down摔倒；send sb to Sp把某人送到某地；make an examination檢查； be responsible for sth. 對……負責；pay attention to注意；fortunately幸運地。重點句型：（1）While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. 當紅燈變紅的時候，一個騎自行車的女孩突然出現(xiàn)在街上。關系代詞who引導的定語從句。（2） He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. 他試圖停車，但為時已晚。try to do sth努力做某事。（3） I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. 我在等過馬路的時候看到了這起事故。狀語從句。8．（天津中考模擬） 作為中學生該怎么度過自己的閑暇時光？你會推薦什么樣的放松方式？理由是什么？請根據(jù)以下表格中的信息寫一篇文章。觀點理由一部分同學喜歡網(wǎng)絡和電視1. 放松,信息量大…………另一部分同學喜歡親近家人、自然和讀書1. 與家人相處更加和睦2. 增長見識，開闊視野你的思考……（不少于一點）參考詞匯：增長見識 increase one’s knowledge 開闊視野 open one’s mind要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。Our society is developing fast. People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our society is developing fast People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and watching TV. They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed. Besides,it is easy for them to municate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside. Others think they should get close to their family,nature,and read a lot. In fact,they are not only good ways to get along better with family members,but also open up their mind and increase their knowledge.I think we should do sports after school in order to keep healthy. What39。s more,we also do after?class activities so that we will have a rich and colourful life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇議論文。以第三人稱陳述觀點，以第一人稱提出思考。主體時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請以One thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以One thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應使用一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應從句子的整體結(jié)構出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。或使用祈使句、非謂語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個特點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實，敘述具體，詳細，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受。結(jié)