【正文】 rts and .: The factory can produce but tons in thousands of different designs for coats, suit s, fashion, shirt s and products are plete in specifications, rich in variety and fashionable in ?平卡姆指出 ,在中式英語(Chinglish)中 ,有很多不必要的名詞 ,因為它們的意義在前面的形容詞或句中的其他修飾語中已經(jīng)體現(xiàn)出來 ,因而在英語中是冗余的(redundant)。句中 “規(guī)格”、“品種” 和“造型” 已暗含在形容詞修飾語“齊全”、“繁多” 和 “新穎” 中 ,所以譯文 1 顯得拖沓累贅 ,譯文 2 只用 “various new types” 簡單明了 ,也符合廣告語言簡潔的特點。譯文評估Cuckooes is a kind of grayishbrown birds without beautiful are aggressive and cruel toward other don’t have nests or hatch their , they lay their eggs into the orioles’s nest, letting the orioles instead them to feed the baby cuckooes, which are larger than baby orioles and even larger than mother orioles when they grow their breaking out of the eggs, the baby cuckooes would push the baby orioles out of the nest, leaving the baby orioles starving and chilling to orioles bring up the baby cuckoo which is bigger than themselves laboriously, without knowing they are cheated by is annoying, miserable to see such a 得病以前，我受父母寵愛，在家中橫行霸道 1，一旦隔離，拘禁在花園山坡上一幢小房子里 2，我頓感打入冷宮 3，十分郁郁不得志起來 4。一個春天的傍晚，園中百花怒放 5，父母在園中設(shè)宴，一時賓客云集，笑語四溢 6。我在山坡的小屋里，悄悄掀起窗簾，窺見園中大千世界，一片繁華 7，自己的哥姐、堂表弟兄 8，也穿插其間，個個喜氣洋洋 9。一霎時，一陣被人摒棄，為世所遺的悲憤兜上心頭 10，禁不住痛哭起來。譯析得病以前，我受父母寵愛，在家中橫行霸道。學譯1：Before the illness, I was much petted by parents, doing everything at will in the ：Before I became ill, I have received all the favor of my parents, just like a little tyrant at ：Before I fell ill, I had been the bully under our roofs owing to my doting 、一旦隔離，拘禁在花園山坡上一幢小房子里，我頓感打入冷宮，十分郁郁不 得志起來。學譯1：When isolated and taken into custody in a small house on the hillside of our garden, I felt like I was abandoned, getting more and more ：As soon as I was kept apart in a small flat built on the hillside in the garden, I suddenly felt being consigned to limbo, gloomily and ：Feeling like being deposed into a cold palace, I began to taste the bitterness of depression and frustration immediately after I was segregated and confined in a small house on a hillside in our 、一個春天的傍晚，園中百花怒放，父母在園中設(shè)宴，一時賓客云集，笑語四溢。學譯：At one dusk in spring, flowers were blooming wildly in the garden, my parents were holding a banquet, in which guests were gathering, laughters could be heard ：On a spring evening, hundreds of flowers were in full bloom in the garden where my parents hosted a a while, guests gathered in large number, laughing and talking, which could be heard ：On a spring evening, my parents gave a banquet in the garden where a profusion of flowers were in full no time, a crowd of their guests collected and laughter was heard all over ，悄悄掀起窗簾，窺見園中大千世界，一片繁華，自己的哥姐、堂表弟兄，也穿插其間，個個喜氣洋洋。In the small house on the slope, I quietly lifted the curtain, only to be met by a great and prosperous world with my elder brothers and sisters and my cousins among the guests, all in ，一陣被人摒棄，為世所遺的悲憤兜上心頭，禁不住痛哭起來。All at once, seized by a fit of forlorn rage, I could not help bursting into tears.