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go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀:這是一篇給材料作文,屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點,寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向,然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點評:文章采取郵件格式,時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),語言準(zhǔn)確,語意連貫,表達清楚,具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點:短語:school gate;invite sb. to do;a lot of;plan to do。句型:not only…but also;You39。d better …;I39。m looking forward to…。9.書面表達 我校決定讓學(xué)生輪流打掃廁所,以此作為教育學(xué)生的一種方式。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強烈的反響,請你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料,報告給學(xué)校。 同意 :1.多數(shù)學(xué)生是獨生子女,不會做事。 2.學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會做艱苦的工作。 3.學(xué)會理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動。 不同意:1.很臟,容易使學(xué)生生病。 2.不是學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事情。 3.打掃教室就足夠了。 注意:1.短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯; 2.不少于80詞。 生詞提示:respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求,這是一篇看法類的作文,那么首先得點明討論的話題,然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。重點詞匯及短語:argument爭論;take place發(fā)生;among(三者或三者以上)之間;a good chance for sb對某人來說是個好機會;help sb do sth幫助某人做某事;get sick生病。亮點句型:(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動以來,在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論?,F(xiàn)在完成時(have/has+done)。(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機會。動詞不定式作主語,謂語動詞用單數(shù),疑問詞+to do。10.近年來,習(xí)近平主席提出了實現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復(fù)興的“中國夢”。學(xué)校開展了“夢想少年”的主題演講活動,假如你是張明,請根據(jù)以下提供的要點,以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇80-100詞的短文,向大家推介自己。(可聯(lián)系實際,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。提示詞語: good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning, dear teachers and friends, I am Zhang Ming. It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here. As a fifteenyearold boy, my dream is to be a good teacher. To make my dream e true, I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects. Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much, and I really enjoy sports. At school, I always follow the school rules, so I am popular with my classmates and teachers. On weekends, I39。d like to help people. For example, I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.In a word, I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. That39。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開展“夢想少年”的主題演講活動,假如你是張明,要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容,以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇短文,向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。在寫作過程中,要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達出來,要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點,注意理順要點,防止漏寫。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。