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ore and more等。而I think it39。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣,是本文的最大亮點。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。9.中央電視臺《經(jīng)典詠流傳》節(jié)目的播出,再次激發(fā)了人們對經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品的閱讀熱情。讀書可以成就更美好的自己,讓讀書伴隨我們成長。請根據(jù)以下要點提示,以“Growing up with Reading”為題寫一篇英語短文介紹你曾經(jīng)讀過的一本書或—首詩,并建議大家多讀書,讀好書。要點提示:讀書的重要性1. 獲取知識,開闊眼界;2. 提升自我,增強自信……讀過的一本書或一首詩1. 作品內(nèi)容簡介;2. 讀書感悟及對自己的影響。多讀書,讀好書1. 利用閑暇時間多讀書,養(yǎng)成讀書的好習(xí)慣;2. 多讀經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品……注意:1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名、學(xué)校及地名。3. 詞數(shù):80100(文章開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯:classic 經(jīng)典作品; open up one’s eyes 開闊眼界;improve oneself 提升自我; be more confident 更自信;responsibility 責(zé)任;cooperation 合作。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. 【答案】Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book39。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was selfconfident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】這是一篇圖表,要求介紹自己讀過的一本書。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一,三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和過去時態(tài),注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。10.寫作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文,標題為“ A time when I made someone happy”,請你寫一篇英文稿件,內(nèi)容需包括以下要點:1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右(題目不計入總詞數(shù))?!敬鸢浮縇ast summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural I arrived there,I couldn39。t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析:這是一篇給定標題的材料作文,需要逐條完成要點問題的回答,描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂的經(jīng)歷,是一篇記敘文,首先要讀懂5個問題,其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言和銜接手段把這五個問題的回答聯(lián)系在一起,變成一篇短文,同時也要注意在描述過去的故事的時候要正確運用過去時態(tài)。寫作亮點:既然這是一篇記敘文,就應(yīng)該完整地呈現(xiàn)故事,需要加上必要的背景,指明時間(Last summer),地點(in rural area),簡要概括事件(teach children English),這是文章首句的點睛之筆,信息量豐富。短語和固定搭配的正確使用也為這篇文章增色不少,例如“adjust to…”(調(diào)整以適應(yīng)…),“as time went by”(隨著時間的流逝),“made great progress”(取得巨大進步),“keep on learning”(繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)),“In a word”(總而言之)等等短語使用正確。在收尾部分表達了作者積極的人生態(tài)度,表示如果還有機會自己還樂于參與,這樣使得這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,表意更加清晰。