【正文】 or Better or Worse?，對于未來的環(huán)境，很多同學(xué)吃樂觀的態(tài)度，而其他同學(xué)感到很擔(dān)心。題目中用表格的形式給我們呈現(xiàn)了這些內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語將他們表達(dá)出來，首先我們應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫汀⒃~匯和短語，以簡單句的結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓、主系表等，點綴幾個并列句或復(fù)合句，提升文章檔次。其次注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般將來時為主，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。最后應(yīng)注意在語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章的邏輯關(guān)系更加合理，文意流暢、連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，并根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，進(jìn)行了合理的想象和補(bǔ)充，使文意更加的充實。短文共分為三段，前兩段各描述了不同的同學(xué)們的觀點，最后一段用一句話點明了自己的看法，層次清晰，敘述條理、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)為主，闡明了學(xué)生們的不同觀點，以簡單句為主，也用了一些復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感，更有表現(xiàn)力。最后短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如In fact, they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．、As a result、However、hey say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.、Therefore, we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．、But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily等。8．Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For exam解析：Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了大量短語，例如in our life，may be，something unpleasant，for example，fail in，laugh at，why not，cheer up，help sb. to do，get closer to，each other等。同時Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的亮點。點睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時，可把提示內(nèi)容結(jié)合實際展開合理的想象，把它們翻譯拓展成一個個英文句子。還要注意在行文中使用一些常見的短語，會給習(xí)作增色。9．Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the gian解析：Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.【解析】試題分析：本文以＂遇見美＂為主題的短文，談?wù)勆钪杏鲆娒赖囊淮谓?jīng)歷，所以句子的主語是第一人稱單數(shù)，句子的謂語動詞用一般過去時，要注意不要遺漏要點，要注意上下文的銜接，用自己熟悉的短語和句式。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give ；用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the 。10．Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. T解析：Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful.Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.Yours FaithfullyJack【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你所在的小區(qū)正在進(jìn)行“模范家庭”的評選活動，請根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。would like to do想做某事； respect each other 彼此尊重； get along well with sb與某人相處融洽；volunteer to help people in 11．How to Have Reading ActivitiesAs we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only ma解析：How to Have Reading ActivitiesAs we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only makes us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves. I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.First, we can read in our school library. There are all kinds of books there. It39。s a good place to read. Second, we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class. Third, we can exchange books with one another. It helps develop our cooperation spirit. At last，it39。s necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.All in all, we can benefit from colorful reading activities.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，主要內(nèi)容是圍繞由于受到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的影響，青少年對閱讀漸漸失去興趣這一現(xiàn)象，就如何在學(xué)生中開展閱讀活動，寫一篇英語小短文。結(jié)合所給的材料可知時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱輔以第三人稱。本作文中給出的要點比較具體，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，注意要理順要點，防止漏寫。在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。提示要點：。：①在圖書館閱讀。 ②在班級建立圖書角。③同學(xué)間互借。 ④計劃閱讀時間及閱讀量?！?12．I’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My TeacherHow time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always fee解析：I’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My TeacherHow time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always feel sorry for one thing in my heart. I’d like to say sorry to my English teacher, Mrs. Chen.When I began to learn English, I hated remembering new words. So I wasn’t good a