【正文】 e part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my school’s part time activity. Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on. Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the activities are wonderful.So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in my school!【解析】話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。15．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關(guān)系和情感態(tài)度）現(xiàn)在社會(huì)普遍對90后，00后有一些誤解， 認(rèn)為他們自私、無禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學(xué)生，你又是怎么看待這個(gè)問題的呢? 請結(jié)合你自己和周圍同學(xué)的表現(xiàn)，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點(diǎn)和兩條不足之處進(jìn)行描述。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。16．（江蘇中考模擬）某英語報(bào)開展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比賽，請你根據(jù)表格中的提示內(nèi)容，簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?. 積極思考，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)2. 及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，防止遺忘過重的壓力1. 無法入睡，非常疲憊2. 害怕考試，導(dǎo)致失敗應(yīng)對的措施1. 合理計(jì)劃，準(zhǔn)備充分2. ……注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右，短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 表格最后一欄中省略部分須用12句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。How to deal with the exam stressEveryone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to Deal with the Exam StressEveryone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．However，if we have too heavy stress，we can39。t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．In my opinion，to deal with stress，we39。d better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we39。ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams． 【解析】試題分析：本書面表達(dá)以“How to deal with the exam stress”為題寫一篇作文。在題目中給出了一張表格，需要用正確的英語將表格中的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。分析表格可以看到，這篇作文的內(nèi)容主要有三個(gè)方面，第一個(gè)是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫ξ覀兪怯泻锰幍模坏诙€(gè)是過多的壓力對我們有害；最后發(fā)表自己的看法，如何來應(yīng)對壓力。因此這篇作文可以分為三段來寫，這樣可以使整個(gè)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)有層次。在每一段中加上具體的內(nèi)容，使段落更加充實(shí)。最后還要補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)自己的觀點(diǎn)。全文需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱來寫。注意多使用一些好的句式、短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。作者按照題目要求把表格中的內(nèi)容完整的表達(dá)出來，并加上了自己的看法。作者將整篇短文分成了三個(gè)部分，首先寫的是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫ξ覀冇欣＿@里作者主要使用的句型或短語有besides，還用到了一些復(fù)合句，如條件狀語從句等；接下來作者寫的是過多的壓力的害處，段首先用however來進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)折，然后使用了一個(gè)復(fù)合句ifwehavetooheavystress,wecan’tsleepwellatnightandwemayfeel too，但是意思很完整；最后作者發(fā)表了自己的觀點(diǎn)，用了短語inmyopinion，還用到了提建議時(shí)經(jīng)常用的hadbetter和should。整篇作文意思連貫，語言流暢，層次分明。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學(xué)?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent