【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 iic in a park or go to a would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that giving up a little can mean getting more.【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如not only …but also…不僅而且。運(yùn)用連詞while 表對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)。運(yùn)用because 表達(dá)原因。運(yùn)用了表語(yǔ)從句表達(dá)原因The main reason for my choice is that …。運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句 decide whether do have a … ；discuss where to go for an outing 運(yùn)用了介詞短語(yǔ) By doing so, Without we did have a lots of fun that ，文章還使用了大量習(xí)語(yǔ)和短語(yǔ)，如be worth doing sth。stick to sth.。have a good time。have lots of fun , tend to do 等?？键c(diǎn)：考查觀點(diǎn)理由。二．如何提高英語(yǔ)寫作作文是英語(yǔ)考試中最靈活的一道題，一定要內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)不全則難得高分。英語(yǔ)作文答題要有步驟：審清要點(diǎn)——確定時(shí)態(tài)——寫好提綱，打好草稿——工整謄寫?？忌貏e是基礎(chǔ)較好的寫作時(shí)要盡量使用多樣詞匯和短語(yǔ)，選擇有變化的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，長(zhǎng)短句交替使用，學(xué)會(huì)活用句型。短句子的使用使文章簡(jiǎn)潔明快。復(fù)雜句型的使用可使文章增色。準(zhǔn)確使用過(guò)渡詞，使文章行文連貫。要想得高分的作文確實(shí)要有比較復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)，但不能為了復(fù)雜而復(fù)雜?；A(chǔ)不牢的學(xué)生要首先注意語(yǔ)言的正確性，沒(méi)有把握的詞匯或句型不要亂用。盡量避免“低能詞匯”在批改過(guò)的上萬(wàn)份英語(yǔ)作文中，經(jīng)常能發(fā)現(xiàn)一些將中文生硬地翻譯成英文的表達(dá)法。目前很大一部分學(xué)生的作文都處在14分左右，寫作滿分30分，18分也就是個(gè)及格分，那么14分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里？這個(gè)問(wèn)題很容易回答。14分的作文中規(guī)中矩，該對(duì)的都對(duì)，包括內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的完整，語(yǔ)法與詞形的正確，但是全都是很簡(jiǎn)單句子的堆砌，沒(méi)有任何亮點(diǎn)。而20多分的作文句型詞匯方面就做了很好的包裝，語(yǔ)句中有很多亮點(diǎn)。在高考作文閱卷過(guò)程中，老師會(huì)對(duì)一些“高級(jí)”詞匯尤為偏愛(ài)。但是，大多數(shù)同學(xué)根本不具備單詞升級(jí)意識(shí)，一想到“好”，就是“good”；一想到“壞”，就是“bad”；一想到“美麗”就是“beautiful”。當(dāng)老師一天批閱上千份“內(nèi)容相同、語(yǔ)言低齡”的作文時(shí)，她的感受可想而知。因此，考生要盡量避免這些“低能詞匯”，讓自己的詞匯升級(jí)。寫作提分的三要素——句型、連詞、高級(jí)詞匯。句子是英語(yǔ)寫作文最大的單位，有了漂亮的句子，用好的連詞將其連句成段，再加上一些如星星般亮點(diǎn)詞匯的點(diǎn)綴，一篇好的高考英語(yǔ)作文就有了。而這三個(gè)因素中最容易把握的是句子，最難的是高級(jí)詞匯，限于大家的詞匯比較有限，一篇文章中出現(xiàn)那么一兩個(gè)就夠了。我們應(yīng)該把重心放在句型上，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)最容易把握。不要用太過(guò)艱澀的長(zhǎng)句。學(xué)生英語(yǔ)作文中錯(cuò)詞太多、形神俱散，這些都是影響作文得分的因素。作文中一個(gè)突出的問(wèn)題就是考生寫不到重點(diǎn)，很多時(shí)候是湊字?jǐn)?shù)。有的考生雖然有內(nèi)容可寫，但是無(wú)關(guān)緊要的話寫得過(guò)多，導(dǎo)致中心內(nèi)容沒(méi)有表達(dá)清楚。有些作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾與話題相關(guān)，但中間卻夾雜著一些無(wú)關(guān)信息。這些作文都會(huì)被扣除較大比例的分?jǐn)?shù)。如果考生想拿高分，首先不要出現(xiàn)較多拼寫錯(cuò)誤的單詞。其次不要用太過(guò)艱澀的長(zhǎng)句，因?yàn)檫@種長(zhǎng)句運(yùn)用不好容易出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，反而會(huì)被扣分。用正常的句式表述完整意思就行。作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾比較重要，要點(diǎn)題或者升華題意，這樣的作文容易吸引老師、拿到高分。完稿后查遺漏，整潔干凈莫忘記。2016年高考正在緊張的備考階段，高考英語(yǔ)是考生們復(fù)習(xí)的重點(diǎn)，為了方便同學(xué)們復(fù)習(xí)，編整理了以下常用連詞和句式：(1)表選擇關(guān)系或?qū)Φ汝P(guān)系的連接詞：either?or?, neither?nor?, or, as well as, and, both?and?.(2)表因果關(guān)系的連接詞：therefore, so, as a result（consequence）,consequently, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to等。(3)表時(shí)間順序的連接詞：the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning, in the end, before long, for the first time, the minute.(4)表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞： while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however,等。(6)表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的連接詞：not only?but(also), what’s more, what’s worse, besides, in addition, moreover,等。(7)表總結(jié)的連接詞：in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all等 常用句式： 第一組 goes without saying that...不用說(shuō)……It goes without saying that it pays to keep early , 早睡早起是值得的。 is no denying the fact that...不可否認(rèn)這個(gè)事實(shí)……=No one can deny...誰(shuí)也不可否認(rèn)……There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and , 成功的關(guān)鍵在于健康的身心。 am greatly convinced(that)...=I am greatly assured(that)...我深信……I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than 。 various kinds of...=Of all the...在各種……之中, ……Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in , 我尤其喜歡慢跑。 my opinion...=As far as I am concerned ,...在我看來(lái), ……In my opinion, playing puter games not only takes up much time but also is harmful to our , 打電腦游戲既花費(fèi)也有害健康。 to my personal experience = Based on my personal experience根據(jù)我個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn) According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of , 微笑帶給我很多好處 all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than...在我認(rèn)識(shí)的人當(dāng)中, 也許沒(méi)有一個(gè)人比……更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than Miss Zhang, my English , 也許沒(méi)有一個(gè)人比我的英語(yǔ)老師張老師更值得我尊敬。 the increase/growth of the population,...隨著人口的增加, …… With the advance of science and technology,...隨著科技的進(jìn)步, ……With the rapid development of our economy ,...隨著我國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展, …… in the world can delight me so much as...世界上沒(méi)有什么比……更令我高興。Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast food 。第二組 one can really put the three points into action(practice),...如果能實(shí)踐這三點(diǎn), ……If one can really put the three points into action(practice), he will surely be able to live a happy , 他肯定能過(guò)上幸福的生活。 this way, I believe(that)...如此, 我相信……In this way, I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like , 我相信大家或許能夠像我一樣, 享受乘坐公共汽車的樂(lè)趣。 with bined efforts, can we...唯有通力合作, 我們才能…… Only with bined efforts, can we expect our hometown take on a new look in due , 我們才能期望我們的家鄉(xiāng)不久會(huì)有新的面貌。 these reasons, I...基于這些理由, 我……For these reasons, I think that receiving college education in China is , 我認(rèn)為在中國(guó)接受大學(xué)教育是明智的。 conclusion,...=To sum up,...總而言之, ……In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic , 好公民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。 can, therefore, e to the conclusion(that)...因此, 我們可以得出如下個(gè)結(jié)論We can, therefore, e to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the , 我們能下個(gè)結(jié)論, 那就是世上和平最珍貴。 we can do as mentioned above，there can be no doubt(that)...如果我們能做到如上所述, 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)地……If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master , 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)地, 我們就能精通英語(yǔ)。, we should realize(that)...所以, 我們應(yīng)該意識(shí)到……Therefore, we should realize that in learning English we can not do without a , 我們應(yīng)該意識(shí)到學(xué)英文不能沒(méi)有詞典, therefore, can make it clear from the above discussion(that)...因此, 由上面的討論我們可以明白……We,