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初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。3.假如你是陽光中學(xué)的李華,你校成功舉辦了“中華詩詞朗誦比賽”,請用英語寫一篇短文,介紹活動情況并呼吁更多的人參與這樣的活動。內(nèi)容要點如下:時間地點5月23號下午;學(xué)校禮堂?;顒咏榻B每學(xué)期舉辦一次。今年又大獲成功。同學(xué)們的精彩表現(xiàn)得到了大家的高度評價。八年級的王麗獲一等獎。她極具朗誦天賦。每位獲勝者贏得一張免費書展的票。呼吁參與的理由......(自擬1到2點)注意事項:(1)須包括所給內(nèi)容要點,要求語句通順、行文連貫作、適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)詞數(shù)在80個左右,文稿的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);參考詞匯:中華詩詞朗誦比賽 Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition。表現(xiàn) performance。 高度評價think highly of 。朗誦recite。天賦gift。免費的freeI39。m Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school... 【答案】I39。m Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school held a Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition on the afternoon of May 23rd. It was held in the school hall. The petition is held every tram. This year it was a big success again. All the teachers and students thought highly of the students39。 wonderful performances. Wang Li from Grade 8 won the first prize. She has a real gift for reciting .Each winner won a free ticket for the book show.I hope more people will take part in this activity and enjoy the beautiful Chinese culture【解析】【詳解】本題是一篇給材料作文,介紹“中華詩詞朗誦比賽”活動情況并呼吁更多的人參與這樣的活動。短文用第一人稱和第三人稱,還會用到被動語態(tài)的句子。寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文,其次考生可根據(jù)表格中的要點提示去寫作。文章必須包括要點中所給的信息,但不要逐句翻譯,并補充兩條個人的觀點。在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。4. 書面表達(dá)暑假即將來臨,對于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個假期,家長們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀點。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意](1)表格中的觀點僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名等信息。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點,然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。5.假如你是天津的一名中學(xué)生李明,剛剛結(jié)東五一小長假的旅游回到學(xué)校。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題,寫一篇短文,向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。(1)5月1日天氣晴朗,我和家人開始了兩天的旅程。(2)早上7:30我們乘京津城際鐵路出發(fā),車程大約半小時。(3)上午我們參觀了故宮博物院,學(xué)到了許多歷史知識,并為朋友們購買了禮物。(4)第二天清晨,我們登上了長城,雄偉的長城是世界著名奇觀之一;下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品嘗北京烤鴨。(5)我的旅游感受……參考詞匯:京津城際鐵路 BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway王府井大街 Wangfujing Street故宮 the Palace Museum北京烤鴨 Peking Roast Duck要求:(1)詞數(shù):80~100個。(2)短文的題目和開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點齊全,行文連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A Trip to BeijingDuring the May Day Holiday,I______________________________________________________________【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and fortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our twodaytrip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to