【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述建議時，描寫具體，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference?！军c睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。4．近年，有一些地區(qū)提出把游泳納入中考的體育考試，并在學(xué)生中做了一次問卷調(diào)查。下面是一個學(xué)校的調(diào)查結(jié)果，請你根據(jù)調(diào)查情況寫一篇英語短文闡明調(diào)查結(jié)果及表達(dá)自己的觀點。贊成的學(xué)生人數(shù)占：57%不贊成的學(xué)生人數(shù)占：43%理由：1. 強(qiáng)身健體，預(yù)防疾病2. 訓(xùn)練求生技能3. 休閑娛樂，放松身心理由：1. 害怕水2. 有危險性3. 氣溫低時容易感冒你的觀點與理由？要求：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。（文章的開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）2. 不得透露學(xué)校，姓名等個人信息，否則不予評分。In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school. 【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against (prevent) illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.(In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.)【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)所給材料，闡明關(guān)于“把游泳納入中考體育考試”的兩種不同觀點，而且最后還要表達(dá)出自己的觀點，所以文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。文章分為三個部分，第一部分，首先引出本文話題，并用Here’s the result from one ， 引出調(diào)查結(jié)果；第二部分分別闡述兩種不同觀點About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….。 However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some my opinion…。注意闡明觀點列舉理由時，要注意條理性，比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文內(nèi)容完整，寫作條理清晰，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，是一篇不錯的文章。5．假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們(不少于三條)。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運用比較級和最高級；2）80詞左右。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________