【正文】 邏輯，語篇順序，注意連接詞的使用和長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合。t lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.【解析】【分析】本文為材料作文，需要寫出第一次做某事，人生中有許多第一次，可以挑選一件讓自己感覺深刻，并且從中學(xué)到了許多東西的事件來寫，這樣的話，貼近生活實(shí)際，學(xué)生有話可說?！闭?qǐng)談?wù)勀闳松凶铍y忘的“第一次”，或許是第一次做家務(wù)、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并說說你從中學(xué)到了什么或有哪些收獲。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述父親節(jié)計(jì)劃；時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，描述具體建議時(shí)，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。8．假如你是李華，下周你們學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生開展“父親節(jié)活動(dòng)計(jì)劃”分享活動(dòng)，你打算先分享給你們班交換生Peter，希望聽聽他的看法。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點(diǎn)提示，并結(jié)合你的家庭實(shí)際情況，給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個(gè)溫情智慧的中國家庭。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。參考詞匯：智能手機(jī)smartphone；掃碼scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。6．書面表達(dá)共享單車為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；2）80詞左右。5．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school. 【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against (prevent) illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.(In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.)【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)所給材料，闡明關(guān)于“把游泳納入中考體育考試”的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)，而且最后還要表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)，所以文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。4．近年，有一些地區(qū)提出把游泳納入中考的體育考試，并在學(xué)生中做了一次問卷調(diào)查。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。s healthy for 二、英語書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練2．安全對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。參考答案：1. what life was like　2. because