【正文】 ng channel(請按下列情況進(jìn)行改正。改began into去掉參考答案：1. what life was like　2. because of。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。4．近年，有一些地區(qū)提出把游泳納入中考的體育考試，并在學(xué)生中做了一次問卷調(diào)查。5．假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。6．書面表達(dá)共享單車為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。8．假如你是李華，下周你們學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生開展“父親節(jié)活動計劃”分享活動，你打算先分享給你們班交換生Peter，希望聽聽他的看法?！闭堈?wù)勀闳松凶铍y忘的“第一次”，或許是第一次做家務(wù)、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并說說你從中學(xué)到了什么或有哪些收獲。但是需要注意文章邏輯，語篇順序，注意連接詞的使用和長短句結(jié)合。但是，我不能氣餒，要從失敗中找原因，從哪里跌倒，就從哪里起來，所以，第二周，我讓媽媽教我做菜，獲得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放棄，就能獲得成功。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。構(gòu)思提綱。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal。 However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some my opinion…?！军c睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。提示：1. 體育鍛煉2. 上下樓梯3. 交朋結(jié)友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求： 1. 語句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容連貫；2．短文可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點。3. ______ ______ ______ dance are you learning? 你學(xué)哪種舞蹈？4. ______ ______ ______relax by using the Internet or watching game shows, but we think ______ ______ ______ ______relax is through exercise. 通過使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)或觀看游戲節(jié)目來放松是很好的，但是我們認(rèn)為最好的方法是通過鍛煉。of 8. bee改becameeverything 7. __________ground. Hard hills of rocks bee rivers of dirt. In 此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。( B. Hunan channel C. Zhou Xun D. Red Sorghum(此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（╲）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，也并用斜線劃掉。 see anything　3. What kind of　4. It39。Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us _____________________________________________【答案】Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, it39。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。下面是一個學(xué)校的調(diào)查結(jié)果，請你根據(jù)調(diào)查情況寫一篇英語短文闡明調(diào)查結(jié)果及表達(dá)自己的觀點。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到80歲。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國最新出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車“mobike”很感興趣，并請你做個簡要介紹。7．俗話說，國有國法，家有家規(guī)。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。初寫短文。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的計劃是什么，你為什么這么做，并表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議