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:1. 詞數(shù)80左右。目前數(shù)量在減少,因?yàn)椋?)人們砍伐森林,大象漸漸失去家園;2)人們捕殺大象,獲取象牙。文章共分為三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容,首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀,然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因,最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信,內(nèi)容包括:1. 這種單車的使用方法(如:APP查看車輛、掃碼開鎖等);2. 這種單車的優(yōu)勢(shì);3. 你對(duì)這種單車的看法。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。提示詞語: gift, love, opinion提示問題: ● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?Dear Peter,How is it going? We will share the plan for Father’s Day next Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,How is it going?We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于記敘文寫作,但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。(文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名)【答案】The First CookingLast weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn39。t lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.【解析】【分析】本文為材料作文,需要寫出第一次做某事,人生中有許多第一次,可以挑選一件讓自己感覺深刻,并且從中學(xué)到了許多東西的事件來寫,這樣的話,貼近生活實(shí)際,學(xué)生有話可說。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來敘述父親節(jié)計(jì)劃;時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,描述具體建議時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點(diǎn)提示,并結(jié)合你的家庭實(shí)際情況,給你的英國(guó)筆友Sam寫一封信,向他介紹一下你的家規(guī),并向他展示一個(gè)溫情智慧的中國(guó)家庭。參考詞匯:智能手機(jī)smartphone;掃碼scan the QR code;交通工具a means of transportation。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。要求:1)恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí);2)80詞左右。In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school. 【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against (prevent) illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.(In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.)【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)所給材料,闡明關(guān)于“把游泳納入中考體育考試”的兩種不同觀點(diǎn),而且最后還要表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn),所以文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。高分亮點(diǎn):短語:save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài),及句式等重要內(nèi)容。s healthy fo