【正文】 【點(diǎn)睛】本篇作文貼近實(shí)際，每個(gè)人都有第一次，挑選一件自己有話(huà)可說(shuō)的來(lái)寫(xiě)即可。9．(B) 《朗讀者》第五期節(jié)目中，主持人在開(kāi)場(chǎng)白中說(shuō)道：“我們的一生，會(huì)經(jīng)歷很多的第一次，難忘而又寶貴，它意味著我們的成長(zhǎng)。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。注意闡明觀(guān)點(diǎn)列舉理由時(shí)，要注意條理性，比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文內(nèi)容完整，寫(xiě)作條理清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。以及狀語(yǔ)從句等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。3．環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé)， 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛(ài)美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源，相信我們的家園會(huì)越來(lái)越美好。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。5. ______ ______ ______the mind and the body. 這對(duì)身心健康都很有益。 9. lain改lay 3. begin9. __________people died of or injured during the earthquake. 2. __________the city, the greatest earthquake of the 20th century begin. 1. __________the world was in an end! Eleven kilometers directly below對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷，每一行均有一處錯(cuò)誤。 B. Exploring spiritC. Interstellar ) can see the film _________________ on November 12nd, 2014.A. Comedy Of Power ) 1. If You want to see something spectacular, you can _________________.A. stay at home D. Guangdo