【正文】 here in the past. 我想知道過去這里的生活怎么樣。5. ______ ______ ______the mind and the body. 這對身心健康都很有益。 the best way to　5. It39。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示，可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3．環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé)， 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源，相信我們的家園會(huì)越來越美好。例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述建議時(shí)，描寫具體，條理清晰。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）2. 不得透露學(xué)校，姓名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評分。注意闡明觀點(diǎn)列舉理由時(shí)，要注意條理性，比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文內(nèi)容完整，寫作條理清晰，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們(不少于三條)。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國家庭。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段寫你為什么這么做；第三段表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。9．(B) 《朗讀者》第五期節(jié)目中，主持人在開場白中說道：“我們的一生，會(huì)經(jīng)歷很多的第一次，難忘而又寶貴，它意味著我們的成長。t know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn39?！军c(diǎn)睛】本篇作文貼近實(shí)際，每個(gè)人都有第一次，挑選一件自己有話可說的來寫即