【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 說(shuō)法是Thanks for…。2．句意：他們非常漂亮。根據(jù)上句話的意思可知，這里說(shuō)的是family photos，家庭照片，是復(fù)數(shù)形式，因此代替它的代詞也應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)的，故把it改為they。3．句意：這是我的家庭照片。根據(jù)這句話的意思可知，這句話的主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是my family photos，是復(fù)數(shù)形式，因此動(dòng)詞be也應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)，把is 改為are。4．句意：Mary，我需要我的筆記本，你能把它帶給我嗎？根據(jù)句意可知，這里的“我”在句中做的是to 的賓語(yǔ)，所以應(yīng)該用賓格形式。I 是主格形式，故把I改為me。5．句意：我有2個(gè)籃球。has 意思是有，它應(yīng)該用于主語(yǔ)是第三人稱單數(shù)的時(shí)候。I是第一人稱，它后面應(yīng)該用have。6．句意：我有2個(gè)籃球和5張照片。photo的意思是照片，根據(jù)句意可知，我有5張照片，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)，它的復(fù)數(shù)形式是直接在后面加s，不是加es。7．句意：我有2個(gè)籃球、5張照片和一個(gè)橡皮。eraser 是一個(gè)名詞，意思是橡皮，這個(gè)單詞的第一個(gè)音是元音發(fā)音，所以不定冠詞應(yīng)該用an。故應(yīng)該把a(bǔ) 改為an。8．句意：我想帶一個(gè)籃球去Jim的學(xué)校。根據(jù)句意可知，這里應(yīng)該是說(shuō)去Jim的學(xué)校，Jim是一個(gè)名詞，這里應(yīng)該把它改為所有格的形式，表示Jim的，即Jim’s。9．句意：他們可以每天打籃球。play basketball打籃球，是一個(gè)固定的短語(yǔ)。在球類運(yùn)動(dòng)的前面不加冠詞，所以把the 去掉。10句意：我非常開(kāi)心，你開(kāi)心嗎？這句話的主語(yǔ)是I，是第一人稱，它后面的be動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該是am，而不是is。is 應(yīng)該用于主語(yǔ)是第三人稱單數(shù)的時(shí)候。二、英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練2．李華的英國(guó)筆友Jessica來(lái)信說(shuō), 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華, 請(qǐng)你給Jessica寫(xiě)一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn)：1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。要求：〔開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；, 意思連貫, 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。Dear Jessica, I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作是以書(shū)信的方式向筆友介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫(xiě)中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫(xiě)我最期待的活動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。3． 假如你是李華, 你的美國(guó)筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫(xiě)封回信。To: lihua@ china. From: bill006@ america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語(yǔ), 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語(yǔ)句通順, 意思連貫, 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；: 不少于70詞（開(kāi)頭已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過(guò)描寫(xiě)夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來(lái)有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問(wèn)題，結(jié)束全文?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開(kāi)篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，讀起來(lái)朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。4． 為提升南京城市形象，我市已啟動(dòng)老小區(qū)出新改造工程。假設(shè)你是 Tim，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示，用英文向你的外國(guó)筆友 Jack 做簡(jiǎn)單的介紹。Purposeimprove the environmentChanges to people?s lifebeautiful buildings, …Problemslots of noise, rubbishYour advice…注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3 詞數(shù) 80 左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________