【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 lpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等。可以適當(dāng)使用高分句型?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對(duì)學(xué)生是有幫助的。I think+賓語從句。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來說是…的。3．目前，許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班，對(duì)此人們有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。 贊成者的觀點(diǎn)1. 能夠?qū)W得更好，考試考得更好，上更好的高中；2. 避免花太多時(shí)間看電視、玩游戲。反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)1. 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息；2. 壓力過大不利于身體健康。你的觀點(diǎn)1. 課堂上好好學(xué)就足夠了，補(bǔ)課不必要；2. 課后可以自己......注意：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法通順，上下文連貫；2. 必須包括提示的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)；3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫目前，許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班，對(duì)此人們有不同的看法。第二段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班贊同者的觀點(diǎn)。第三段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)。【詳解】，看看有哪些要求？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。、短語、句型。，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用短語、句型：all kinds of ，Some others，As for me ，Some people think that They also believe thatIf they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning 。【點(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，可以分四段寫：總體簡單描述話題；贊成；反對(duì)；你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。4．假如你是李明，5月18日星期六這一天，你與幾位同班同學(xué)一起參觀了水上公園 (Water Park)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇日記。(1)，游客多；(2)上午劃船，下午看了許多動(dòng)物，例如…：(3)碰到幾位外國朋友并與他們交談：(4)看到了亂扔垃圾、插隊(duì)等不良現(xiàn)象：(5)你的感想…參考詞匯：.插隊(duì)cut in line要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。(2)短文的開頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?May 18, Saturday Fine Today I visited Water Park with several of my 【答案】May 18, Saturday FineToday I visited Water Park with several of mv classmates. It took us about an hour to get there by bus. When we arrived, there were a lot of visitors.In the morning, we went boating and enjoyed ourselves. We saw many animals, such as pandas, giraffes and monkeys in the afternoon. They are so lovely. We met some foreign guests and talked with them happily. However, during our visit we saw some people throwing rubbish and cutting in line.In my opinion, it is our duty to protect the environment and follow the rules in public. And I hope changes will take place in the future.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫參觀日記。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)和關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。為了使語言更顯親切，在寫作時(shí)主語用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主。同時(shí)注意時(shí)間狀語與時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤，做到語意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】此類作文首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀題目要求，結(jié)合所給材料確定內(nèi)容，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)對(duì)考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。5．書面表達(dá)初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活, 你一定有成功的體驗(yàn), 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請(qǐng)你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫一篇演講稿。提示：(1)What was the event?(2)How did you make it?(3)What’s your feeling?要求：(1)發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying