【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 he teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。5． “美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護(hù)她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來(lái)，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見(jiàn)。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文號(hào)召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)中來(lái)。要求：，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，號(hào)召中學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)。題目中并沒(méi)有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面來(lái)敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱we來(lái)敘述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以常見(jiàn)的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號(hào)召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補(bǔ)充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個(gè)方面，對(duì)中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)句通順，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句式，語(yǔ)句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。6．自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂(lè)。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺(tái)，生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你為?？⒄Z(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?，分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷，并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語(yǔ)：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing提示問(wèn)題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。