【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 en did you start it?4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?要求：1. 緊扣主題，語言表達要準確，語意要通順、連貫；2. 不少于80詞。My hobby 【答案】My? HobbyI have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it39。s always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.【解析】【詳解】本篇作文按照要求可分為4塊兒內(nèi)容，首先指出我的愛好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接著說明為什么喜歡這個愛好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years ，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one . 中間用到短語such as…,以及連詞because…., when….and…等，使文章表達清晰，也具有連貫性，時態(tài)運用正確，是一篇不錯的文章。9．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達。職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃（career planning）一詞源于1908年的美國，指的是對職業(yè)生涯乃至人生進行持續(xù)的系統(tǒng)的計劃的過程。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學生，我們也是時候該思考我們的職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃了。請以此為主題寫一篇短文。寫作要求:：80—120詞；。參考要點：1. 職業(yè)選擇及原因；2. 現(xiàn)階段的準備（學習、興趣發(fā)展等）；3. ……My Career Planning_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career PlanningEverybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What39。s more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以My Career Planning為話題，介紹我的職業(yè)規(guī)劃?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當一名教師，接下來介紹我選擇當老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準備，最后表示只要我有機會，我將會選擇做一名老師。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。10．（黑龍江中考模擬）假如你是 Lin lei，與朋友Mary約好一起去歷史博物館，但因故不能赴約。請給她寫封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：（1）表示歉意；（2）說明原因；（3）另約時間。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Mary,I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. I have to go to see my friend in the hospital that morning. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Sunday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Lin Lei【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息向Mary解釋一下你不能赴約的原因。主要從表示歉意；說明原因；另約時間這三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。【高分句型一】I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. 很抱歉，我星期六早上不能和你一起去歷史博物館了。句子that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday ?！靖叻志湫投縄f it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. 如果方便的話，我們8:30在校門外見面。If it’s convenient for you是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你是在蘇州學習的英國交流學生Max，你的英國同學Simon給你寫了一封電子郵件，想了解你在蘇州的學習和生活情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件內(nèi)容，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實際情況用英語給Simon回復(fù)一封電子郵件。To: maxbritain@From: simonbritain@Subject: Life in SuzhouDear Max,How are you? I haven39。t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。m interested in your life in Suzhou. Would you please tell me the following information?Is everything OK with the school you study in?What are your English classes like?Is there anything interesting in Suzhou?Do you enjoy your life in Suzhou? Why or why not?Looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishesYours,Simon注意：?；貜?fù)郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。，可適當發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。m sorry I haven39。t written to you till now. I will send you some photos next time. Take care!YoursMax【答案】Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。m sorry I haven39。t written to you till am really busy with the course and making new friends these here are kind and friendly .I am getting on well with them.My school starts at 8 finishes at 4: school,we can do some sports to classes in China are not live ones in texts are easy.Suzhou is a beautiful ’s famous for its pretty ’s lots of delicious local food enjoy my life in Suzhou because I can experience a lot here. I will send you some photos next time. Take care!YoursMax【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給我的英國同學Simon給寫一封電子郵件，介紹我在蘇州的學習和生活情況。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。m sorry……，.People here are……，My school starts at……，It’s famous for…….，There’s……，I will send you……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。