【正文】 up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39?！驹斀狻?，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅持做的一件事，根據提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時?！芭懿健?，正文部分詳細地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑；結尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結構清晰，前后呼應。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。 ”6．（請簡要描述圖片內容，分析圖中現(xiàn)象，談談你的看法和建議，并寫一篇 110 詞左右的短文向Parents 雜志投稿，讓父母們通過閱讀你的文章有所啟發(fā)。s mother wanted to keep watch on Tony39。s study and makes him respond strongly. From a child39。t think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children39。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫投縄t will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. 這也會影響未來的自信心建設，也會導致更多的擔憂兒童，形成影響親子關系的惡性循環(huán)。7．（ 請以 “My opinions about school bullying” 為題， 寫一篇英語短文，談談你的看法。參考詞匯：心理問題mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談談你對校園欺凌的看法。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語以及“比較級and比較級”?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。湖南中考模擬）書面表達假如你校英語社團即將舉辦為“My hobby” 的征文活動， 請你根據下面的提示問題寫一篇短文介紹你的愛好，然后參加此活動。My hobby 【答案】My? HobbyI have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it39。9．（職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃（career planning）一詞源于1908年的美國，指的是對職業(yè)生涯乃至人生進行持續(xù)的系統(tǒng)的計劃的過程。請以此為主題寫一篇短文。參考要點：1. 職業(yè)選擇及原因；2. 現(xiàn)階段的準備（學習、興趣發(fā)展等）；3. ……My Career Planning_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career PlanningEverybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What39?！驹斀狻拷Y合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。開頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當一名教師，接下來介紹我選擇當老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準備，最后表示只要我有機會，我將會選擇做一名老師。10．（請給她寫封電子郵件，內容包括：（1）表示歉意；（2）說明原因；（3）另約時間。主要從表示歉意；說明原因；另約時間這三個方面去介紹。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。【高分句型一】I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. 很抱歉，我星期六早上不能和你一起去歷史博物館了?！靖叻志湫投縄f it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. 如果方便的話，我們8:30在校門外見面。11．（請認真閱讀下面的郵件內容，根據信中的內容及你的實際情況用英語給Simon回復一封電子郵件。t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。回復郵件的開頭和結尾己經寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關信息。m sorry I haven39。m sorry I haven39。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I39。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。此處be busy with, get on well with, be famous for, send sb sth, next time, take care等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。山東中考模擬）寫作讀萬卷書,行萬里路。你校也計劃開展此項活動,但是有些學生表示歡迎,也有些表示反對。要求,可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫?？蓞⒖家韵略~匯the sense of social responsibility社會責任感。 practical ability實踐能力My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forStudents 【答案】My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools ha