【正文】 能是你的家人、老師、朋友、同學……甚至是路人。請以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 為題寫一篇英語作文，描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。2. 文中不得出現真實的學校，姓名等個人信息。A person who impressed me a lot 【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life. I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。甘肅中考模擬）發(fā)明創(chuàng)造改變了世界。要求：1. 80詞左右，可適當發(fā)揮。How to Bee an Inventor?With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream e true? In my opinion, 【答案】How to Bee an Inventor?With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream e true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of ,interesting is the best can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the 39。s the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.What I have list above is my answer to how to bee an inventor,and that is what I39。【詳解】結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That39。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。此處play an important role in, e true, give up, such as等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。海林市朝鮮族中學中考模擬）（B） 如今，許多學生課下熱衷于在手機上聊天，請根據下列提示寫一篇短文，針對這種現象談談你的看法與建議。80～100詞。結果：對運動不感興趣，不愿面對面交流。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。構思提綱。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。9．（在這三年里你的生活中定不乏難以忘懷的人或事，請以“An unforgettable in my school life”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。要求: ，如teacher. classmate或trip等:2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和學校姓名。【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school lifeFor these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.【解析】【分析】本篇是話題作文，介紹自己難忘的人或事。，開頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題，正文部分詳細描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己， is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。：巧用連詞， not only…but also，because of as well as，so…that…句子得以有機結合；短語how to do sth，teach sb to do sth，care for也為文章的語言增色不少。陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達“文明是一面鏡子，折射出一座城市的品質”。在你身邊有哪些不文明現象？作為中學生，我們應該從哪些方面做起，為文明城市的建設出一份力？請根據提示詞，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”為題，號召全體中學生共創(chuàng)美好西安。 traffic rules。 collect the trash。 clean the streets。Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們闡述身邊的不文明現象，并闡述我們應該如何做，為文明城市的建設出一份力。需要注意題目中給出的提示詞在文章中必須要用上，可以根據表達需要調整順序。審題可知，短文應以一般現在時態(tài)為主，第一人稱來敘述。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應穿插幾個并列句或復合句的結構?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目提示，介紹了自己身邊的不文明現象，并對中學生如何創(chuàng)建文明城市貢獻自己的力量提出了自己的看法。文章內容分成兩