【正文】 ol have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。8．（你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學習和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請給學弟學妹們提幾點建議吧！要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。100 詞左右。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。9．（”我們大多數(shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。要求:。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補充。短文應由開頭、主體和結尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。短文有如下幾個特點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實，敘述具體，詳細，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。結構清晰，安排合理。語言得體，語法規(guī)范，句式結構以簡單句為主，也使用了時間狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復雜句式結構。10．（你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化，并給出建議。寫作時應合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。如可以使用簡單句結構，易于掌握，不容易出錯?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。句式結構以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。安徽中考模擬）書面表達你看過中央電視臺董卿主持的節(jié)目《朗讀者》嗎？這是一檔非常受歡迎的節(jié)目，讓我們看到生活中讀書的美好、讀書的重要。要求：1．語言表達準確，短文連貫、通順；2．短文應包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；文章開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文使用的時態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標點符號，主謂一致等是否有錯誤。（1）學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（3）列好提綱和要點，及需要的重要短語或句型。注意表達的順序。（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是中學生李華，你的美國筆友 Jim 一周前給你發(fā)了電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的旅游計劃及其他安排， 但由于某種原因你沒有及時回復。提示詞語: exams, go on a trip， volunteer， visit some museums提示問題： ? Why didn’t you reply to Jim’s in time?? Where do you plan to travel?? What are your other plans for the summer holiday?To: JimFrom: Li HuaSubject: A planDear Jim,I39。t reply to your in time because __________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear JimI39。t reply to your in time because I was busy preparing for theexams.I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. I promiseto send you some wonderful photos then.I’m going to do something meaningful during the ing summer holiday. First, I plan to dosome volunteer work in my munity. Second, I’ll visit some museums to learn moreknowledge.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的美國筆友Jim寫信，內(nèi)容包括：你沒有及時回復他的郵件的原因；你暑假打算去哪里旅行以及暑假里的其他安排。首先應注意內(nèi)容的完整，要包含題目中要求的所有要點，題目只是列出了一個提綱，沒有規(guī)定要學生寫什么，因此具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要學生們自己來發(fā)揮，理由要充分、合理，暑假安排要符合日常生活和學生的身份。通過分析可知，這篇短文講的是暑假的計劃，應主要使用一般將來時態(tài)，be going to結構或者will+動詞原形都可以。使用簡單句結構，點綴并列句和復合句，長短句結合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文共分三段，第一段介紹了自己沒有及時回復郵件的原因，用了一句話簡潔、明了。整篇文章結構安排合理，層次清晰，內(nèi)容充實。文章中簡單句和復合句交叉使用，長短句結合，句式不單調(diào)，有節(jié)奏感。m terribly sorry I couldn39。還有一些較好的句型和短語，如be busy doing sth, promise to do sth., do something meaningful, plan to do learn more knowledge等等。13．（假如你是李明，你們學校將開展以How to keep healthy，體育鍛煉和好的生活習慣等方面寫一篇演講稿。（姓名，校名和地名等）不少于70詞。不計入總字數(shù)。tohealthyHi, Everyone, I39。gladgivespeechMyis Howkeep healthy.【答案】 Hi, Everyone, I39。文章時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達是否準確，語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤。在提出建議時，可以使用first，second???進行列舉，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；條理性更強。14．（英國懷特學校下學期組織學生來你校學習了解中國文化，請你以李明的身份給該校校長Mr. Green寫一封郵件，介紹你校的相關活動安排及其理由。參考要點：（打乒乓、包餃子……）2. 安排理由（非常流行、帶來好運……）3. …….Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your ing.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of