【正文】 My favorite gift from childhood is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My favorite giftMy favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. I like it very much because it is so cute. It39。t want to give it up, but to be honest, I have to. Because I39。主要從：你最喜歡的禮物是什么？你擁有它多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間了？它是誰(shuí)送給你的？它有什么特別的意思？它給你帶來(lái)了怎樣的回憶？這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t39。句子because I used to play with it almost every day是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。句子when I was six years old是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)“文明是一面鏡子，折射出一座城市的品質(zhì)”。在你身邊有哪些不文明現(xiàn)象？作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該從哪些方面做起，為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力？請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示詞，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”為題，號(hào)召全體中學(xué)生共創(chuàng)美好西安。 traffic rules。 collect the trash。 clean the streets。Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們闡述身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，并闡述我們應(yīng)該如何做，為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力。需要注意題目中給出的提示詞在文章中必須要用上，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要調(diào)整順序。審題可知，短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，第一人稱來(lái)敘述。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個(gè)并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目提示，介紹了自己身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，并對(duì)中學(xué)生如何創(chuàng)建文明城市貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量提出了自己的看法。文章內(nèi)容分成兩個(gè)部分：第一部分列舉了一些不文明現(xiàn)象；第二部分介紹了為創(chuàng)建文明城市，中學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。短文中的一些好的句型和短語(yǔ)有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。靖江外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽(yáng)的短文。每周花七個(gè)多小時(shí)閱讀各種類型的書，因?yàn)椤?yōu)秀事跡上個(gè)月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來(lái)夢(mèng)想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個(gè)人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。12．（要求條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，可做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。外貌 圓臉，笑瞇瞇的大眼睛；比我矮一點(diǎn)；帶著小圓眼鏡，讓她看上去很機(jī)靈。當(dāng)我憂傷時(shí)，她總是關(guān)心我，而且仔細(xì)傾聽我的問(wèn)題，……。3. 喜歡DIY，……3．愿意和別人分享東西，幫助人時(shí)總有耐心，長(zhǎng)大后……。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。湖南中考模擬）人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達(dá)思想3. 有利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2. 影響學(xué)習(xí)3. 可能上當(dāng)受騙（be cheated）1. ...2. ...注意：1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行合理拓展。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meanin