【正文】 still don39。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應根據(jù)材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題。在寫作時，本文的主語可以用第一人稱，時態(tài)一般應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. ；Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in 。山東中考模擬）書面表達4月28日，國家主席習近平在北京延慶出席年中國北京世界園藝博覽會開幕式，提出綠色發(fā)展“五個追求”（fivepoint initiative on green development），為全球生態(tài)文明建設貢獻中國智慧。參考要點: 1保護自然，如：綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然，如：讓天更藍山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與，從身邊小事做起，如：適度節(jié)約，拒絕浪費……；做到人與自然的和諧。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學校的選擇。寫一篇短文，內容須包括：讀寄宿學校的利和弊；讀走讀學校的利和弊；你的選擇和理由（不得與上述兩點內容重復）。100詞左右（文章開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮。可以分三段寫。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學校的利弊；讀走讀學校的利弊?！驹斀狻?，看看有哪些要求？哪些時態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應用文？，單一還是混合。并運用適當?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。【點睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，注意過渡性語言的使用。6．（請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。要求：。3. 注意時態(tài)的正確使用，80100詞?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：交代寫作目的：即將畢業(yè)，想和大家分享這三年的經(jīng)歷。第三部分：總結全文。7．（低碳生活對我們大家都有好處，請你寫一篇短文向一家英文報社投稿。提示詞語：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lowcarbon life is good for help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a ,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the think it39。d better not spend much money on expensiveclothes.If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建議。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。廣東中考模擬）近年來，我國校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生，而遭受校園欺凌的學生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不 敢去學校，甚至會出現(xiàn)心理問題等嚴重后果。提示：1. What do you think of school bullying?2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求：1. 所給提示信息應全部包括，可適當發(fā)揮，以 使行文連貫；2. 80詞以上。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。構思提綱。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。9．（請根據(jù)提示內容，以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關信息介紹一下校園安全。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。【高分句型一】Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應該和陌生人一起去，也不應該接受陌生人的東西?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處。10．（提示詞語： help, care, municate, drive to hospital, own family提示要點：When are you going to leave?Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?How do you feel?Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。文章用第一人稱來寫，時態(tài)主要用一般過去時和一般將來時。句子中有when引導的時間狀語從句。” 其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導的定語從句。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。，自由發(fā)揮的內容必須圍繞主題。In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.First, we should choose to live a lowcarbon life. ______________________________. Second,________________________________________________________________.Third,_________________________________________________________________.Finally,________________________________________________________________.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【答案】In ord