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【正文】 只有描述最高只有 5分； ? 觀點(diǎn)能夠自圓其說(shuō)，語(yǔ)言要跟上自己的邏輯； ? 只講一方面不注重全局，最高 8分。 開(kāi)放作文 ? 審題： 1. 描圖：大狗，小狗，香腸，桌子 2. 解圖，立意。 1）父母愛(ài)（無(wú)私，奉獻(xiàn)） 2）父母愛(ài) (教育孩子的方法） 3）合作 （助人為樂(lè)） 4）父母愛(ài)（溺愛(ài)） 不當(dāng)立意 3. 回圖，重申立意。 ? In the picture, a small dog is standing on the back of a big dog, reaching for the sausage on the table, which is taller than either of them. Only in this way can they manage to enjoy the food together. ? I think the passage conveys the message that cooperation can lead to success if one can’t acplish the work alone. Faced with difficulty, we can work together to overe it. Just as the picture shows, it is cooperation that helps the two clever dogs achieve their goal: getting the sausage despite the height of the table. As we all know, one person’s ability is limited, but two heads are better than one. Working together is a more effective way to succeed. ? As we can see in the picture, a baby dog is standing on its mother’s back trying to reach a sausage lying on the table. The baby dog is obvious excited at the ing food. ? The picture conveys the message that parents always spare no efforts to help their children. The mother dog sacrifices herself to help its children, just like countless mothers in reality. On the other hand, children can’t fet their parents’ love. They should understand what parents do for them and be grateful to them. ? As far as I’m concerned, parents’ love is the greatest emotion in the world. Just like the mother dog, she is unselfish at all. It’s our responsibility to respect our parents and love them in return.
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