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iting sports games, lovely wild animals and colorful foreign customs. It is through TV that we feel close to nature and human world. Television can also play an educational role in our daily life. Actually, TV provides people with almost all kinds of educational programs ranging from popular science to foreign language learning. Even housewives, farmers and selftaught students are able to learn what they need from different special programs. However, television can also be harmful. Quite a few parents plain that a number of TV programs about sex and violence have bad effects on their children. Moreover, people who watch TV too much can hardly work or study regularly and efficiently. Therefore, it is sometimes necessary to turn off TV for the good of everyone of us. 第一篇作文好幾次用到 many (a lot of), 給人印象模糊 。 第二篇?jiǎng)t以 various, colorful, all kinds of, quite a few, a number of 使內(nèi)容顯得較豐富 , 理由也說得更透一些 。 學(xué)點(diǎn)修辭 : 請(qǐng)看一篇習(xí)作: Why I want To Be An Architect When I was a child, I dreamed of being a teacher, a singer or an engineer. But now I am learning architecture in the university, and I hope someday I will bee a famous architect like I. M. Pei. Why I want to be an architect? I think the reasons are as follows: First, an architect should have rich imagination and creativity like an artist. He is supposed to bring together beauty and art with professional business sense. As a matter of fact, every architectural design is a work of art, and art is not so boring as some pure scientific subjects. Second, the skill of drawing is quite important in architecture. I like drawing pictures, and I will be very happy when I see hotels of different styles and even skyscrapers are rising from drawings of my design. Third, architecture is challenging. The designs of an architect must stand up to the critic eyes of people and the test of time. As for me, challenge is constructive rather than destructive. It is by challenge that I can improve my work and create stronger and modern buildings appealing to customers. A man must do something useful in his life. Hopefully, I will be able to do something by my architectural design.