【正文】 / enlarge/ broaden/ develop/improve 這些單詞在作文中出現(xiàn)頻率較高 ， 有必要格外小心 ， 老出錯 ， 就會給讀者或評卷人以不好的印象 。 英語中也不乏簡單詞語用得很生動的例子 。 例 : (2) 作文與詞語 I’m a student of Hunan University. I’m studying in Tumu Department. I like my major very much. 要能正確和恰當(dāng)?shù)赜迷~語表達(dá)意思 ， 首先必須意識到英語詞語和漢語詞語并非是一一對應(yīng)的 。 He deems it his duty to help his fellow classmates. 6. 我覺得他不會同意。 求表達(dá)正確 : behavior information traffic equipment homework damage knowledge progress trouble experience work money advice 看看下面一段文字： A student who ignores regular study and idles away his time daydreaming will bee worried just before the examination. Then he frantically does all the reading in a day or two, or even stays up all night, trying to cramming hundreds of facts into his head. As a result, he es to the examination not only tired out but also confused by a mess of facts. 詞語用得具體 ， 還有助于展開細(xì)節(jié) ， 使作文不至于總是干巴巴的幾句話 。 ” 一個 “ 挑 ” 字 ， 使酒店前掛的旗子活活有了生命 。 例 : ... As I was a little tired from the journey to the college, I went to bed early. At mid night, I suddenly woke up. I found that there was no gate in the college. The First Day I Came to College e. 主題模糊。 I have a sense that he won’t agree. 7. 你覺得這樣做合算嗎？ Do you find it pays? 9. 很多次我覺得自己是勝利者 。 試比較： daydream、 frantically、 cram等詞語把這類學(xué)生考試前忙得昏頭昏腦的情景較細(xì)致地述出來 。 當(dāng)日晌午時分 ， 走得肚中饑渴 ，望見前面有個酒店 ， 挑著一面招旗在門前 ， 上頭寫著五個字道： “ 三碗不過岡 。 例 : Failure Is The Mother of Success Because we often fail. No failure no success. Different people have different attitudes toward failure. Failure is natural. If we are not afraid of failure, it will bee the mother of success. Failure is very important. No pains no gains. Failure can lead to success. Fake modities are bad to us. They not only are bad to our life, but also to our health. In a store , even a supermarket, all kind of fake modities always can be found. It is very harmful to customers society and even to a country. Fake Commodities Do you like travelling? Probably you will say “Yes, I like it very much!” That’s right. Traveling I think travelling is really good to everyone of us. Do you agree with me, my dear friend? d. 套用中文模式。