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tter and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如take place,in our hometown,in the past,used to be,go to do,on foot,by bike,better and better,more and more等。而I think it39。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點?!军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6.共享單車自從2016年在江陰投入使用以來,給人們帶來了諸多便利,受到人們的追捧,改變了人們的出行方式,但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn),是國民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”,請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示,給21世紀(jì)英文報寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn),飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢隨處可見,出行方便有益健康,減少污染費用不高,負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題未及時歸還占道擋路你的觀點我認(rèn)為參考詞匯:公共自行車public bicycles注意事項:,要求語句通順,意思連貫。“你的觀點”一欄用23句話展開合理想象,做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。,文章的開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文,要求給英文報社寫一篇投稿,介紹對共享單車看法。作文應(yīng)包括4個主要內(nèi)容,一個是社會現(xiàn)狀,第二個優(yōu)點,第三是存在的問題,最后發(fā)表個人的觀點。動筆前要認(rèn)真審題,深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵,不可遺漏要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要注意上下文的連貫,將這些內(nèi)容有機的連接起來,不要逐句翻譯。使用一些好的句型和短語,注意正確的時態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動詞的形式,還需要注意英語表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣的不同,讓整篇短文表達(dá)流暢。7. 假如你是李華,你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達(dá)了想?yún)⒓幽阈J钇跒橥鈬鴮W(xué)生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望,希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點,活動安排以及你的建議。提示詞語: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interes