【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5． “美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護(hù)她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文號(hào)召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)中來。要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語寫一篇短文，號(hào)召中學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面來敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱we來敘述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號(hào)召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補(bǔ)充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個(gè)方面，對(duì)中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準(zhǔn)確，語句通順，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。6．書面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個(gè)自己心愛的物品吧！請(qǐng)以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個(gè)或一件你心愛的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。要求：1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3. 語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, fath