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順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題,結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息,闡述自己難忘的中學生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,要點齊全,語言簡練。文中 not only …but also…,help a lot,share happiness and sadness,do well in,give up, besides,so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.,therefore, be proud of等詞(組)恰當使用,使上下文意連接緊密;文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達了自己愿望與想法,使文章增色不少,值得學習。6. 假如你是李華,你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達了想?yún)⒓幽阈J钇跒橥鈬鴮W生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望,希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點,活動安排以及你的建議。提示詞語: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達,只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外,還要進行適當拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進行寫作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標準書信格式進行了收尾。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。文章條理分明,三個要點提示都已表達清楚,并進行了適當拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。:短語:as follows,take part in,What’s more,look forward to。句型:被動句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,主語從句。7.近年來,習近平主席提出了實現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復興的“中國夢”。學校開展了“夢想少年”的主題演講活動,假如你是張明,請根據(jù)以下提供的要點,以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇80-100詞的短文,向大家推介自己。(可聯(lián)系實際,適當發(fā)揮)注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。提示詞語: good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning, dear teachers and friends, I am Zhang Ming. It39。s great honor for me to