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由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達(dá)思想3. 有利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2. 影響學(xué)習(xí)3. 可能上當(dāng)受騙(be cheated)1. ...2. ...注意:1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行合理拓展。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右,短文的開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文,第一段要寫(xiě)贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點(diǎn),第二段要寫(xiě)反對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點(diǎn),第三段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)?!驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見(jiàn),寫(xiě)作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示,確定文章中心。注意文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。文章要有層次、流暢??梢赃m當(dāng)發(fā)揮,寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系,要符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分三段寫(xiě):贊成;反對(duì);你的看法。注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語(yǔ),句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。6.寫(xiě)作81. 春天,許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動(dòng)。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然,某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文參加征文。提示:1)What’s the benefit (好處) of outdoor activities? (12 opinions)2)Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? (12 examples)3)What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? (At least 1 suggestion)要求:1)表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù);4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析:本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“outdoor activities”為話題,結(jié)合所給的寫(xiě)作材料,寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)刊征文稿。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、要點(diǎn)齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密;本文還采用了豐富的句型,比如:It is +形容詞+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。7.書(shū)面表達(dá)